{series} Empire of Midnight: don't flutter by

Nov 04, 2009 03:46


don't flutter by
→ Jonghyun/Key, Onew/Minho, Minho/Taemin; PG-16
He lands in your heart, not a second late.
thanks siaht for the help & jecca-o9 for the beta :D

His eyes flutter open, don’t flutter by. )

p: onew/minho, !fanfic, p: minho/taemin, !series, p: jonghyun/key

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miximel November 4 2009, 09:32:29 UTC
OKAY. ugh. this was so good. I loved it. idek. Your Jonghyun and Key are perfect as usual, and I really loved Minho, Taemin, and Onew..I want to know more about Minho, so I hope you do write that side story. <3 oh and of course I loved the sexy club part sflkjsmndg so hot, so hot. *________*



THAT WAS ME WHEN IT ENDED. like, my head actually went down and everything sdkgjsklg so good, why did it have to end (AND BEFORE SEX WHAT) omg. ilu. :(

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ontokki November 4 2009, 09:37:21 UTC
~♥♥♥♥~ your comments always make me smile :(
I hope I 'inspired' you with my short club scene ~o~
/gets to writing vamp!Minho
I'M SORRY IT ENDED BEFORE SEX. This was getting too long and complicated lol
ilu2 ;~;

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miximel November 4 2009, 09:46:23 UTC
DD: I feel like crap because my review was so short but I really did love it so much skfjesdklf I'm just tired. :( LOL you definitely did, I'll have to start writing that part soon - I hope I can make it half as hot as this was.

vamp!minho is gonna be angsty isn't it? *_* I usually don't like angst, but minho looks so hot when he's all ~serious~ and sexy-like. excited klsfjalk

OMG LOL NO IT'S OKAY~ I love how it ended with a simple “Let’s fuck.” unffff jjong bb. T-T

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ontokki November 4 2009, 09:51:27 UTC
omg get some rest♥ omg yes yes yes /excited *_* ~feel my excitement~

It's going to be angsty at first but hopefully it'll mellow out with his relationship with Onew & Taemin @_@ idek lol

mmm I can totally imagine Jonghyun saying that right now :Q___



/goes to sleep

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