{series} Empire of Midnight: don't flutter by

Nov 04, 2009 03:46


don't flutter by
→ Jonghyun/Key, Onew/Minho, Minho/Taemin; PG-16
He lands in your heart, not a second late.
thanks siaht for the help & jecca-o9 for the beta :D

His eyes flutter open, don’t flutter by. )

p: onew/minho, !fanfic, p: minho/taemin, !series, p: jonghyun/key

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jonghyun November 4 2009, 15:16:27 UTC

OHAI GUESS WHO'S READING? (lol obv)
Vampire!Jonghyun is just sexy and too hard to resist.
Club scene is A+
And gawd, your Onew is just too adorable <33
(and I'm kinda getting the feeling Taem's too much of a masochist for Minho? lol idk o.o)

I would so love to read about Minho's side story, bb.

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ontokki November 4 2009, 22:14:06 UTC
omg you're reading my Jongkey fic DDDDDDD: /honored
fff I know right. I'll read any fic with vamp!Jong XD
I think I had the most fun writing Onew. I just wanna hug him ;-;
(Taemin is ~o~ and he's sick so it makes it even worse T-T)

you got it :Db

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magnae_lover November 4 2009, 16:09:01 UTC
OH MY GOD

“Now,” Jonghyun looks up at Kibum whose face is flushed red. “Let’s fuck.”

“Kibum,” Jonghyun stares at Kibum’s eyes through his mask as he pushes their bodies together.

~> I like this ;~; SO MUCH. Both of them are SO HOT.

I love the ending -- "Let's fuck." ~> yup, that's the way Jjong is XD
Your fic always surprised me, as awesome as ever ! <3
Keep on writing plz <3

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vaneszikkipower November 4 2009, 17:02:20 UTC
just WAOUH!!!
Loved it.

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ontokki November 4 2009, 22:14:43 UTC
Thank you :D

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vaneszikkipower November 4 2009, 22:19:45 UTC
You're welcome

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ontokki November 4 2009, 22:17:32 UTC
I'm glad you like it!
Thank you for reading. I'll try to write more :D

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r_hr_maniac November 4 2009, 17:56:31 UTC
This was damn good :D Sometimes kind of...too fast? But I don't know, it didn't bother me much.
That Minho/Taemin/Jinki situation seems verrrrrry interesting. So I guess Taemin is Minho's 'perfect one' but Jinki's his boyfriend? And Jinki's all too nice for his own good, again. :D

♥♥♥

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ontokki November 4 2009, 22:18:32 UTC
Oh I know what you mean :( When I first wrote it, it was way too fast so I edited it. bahhhh @_@
*cough other way around* :D

Thank you for reading D:♥

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