Comments | phantisma: My Brother's Keeper, Part 13

phantisma

My Brother's Keeper, Part 13 - Supernatural, NC-17

Sep 30, 2006 20:50

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: My Brother's Keeper, Part Thirteen( Part One Here, Part Two Here, Part Three Here, Part Four Here, Part Five Here, Part Six Here, Part Seven Here, Part Eight Here, Part Nine Here, Part Ten Here, Part Eleven Here, Part Twelve HereCharacters/Pairing: Sam/Dean ( Read more... )

dark fic, fandom: supernatural, character: dean, character: sam, supernatural:gseries:1:amara_m, series: keeper, dub-con

Comments 26

anakin415 October 1 2006, 04:26:05 UTC

ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT.

Sam & John are gonna have alot to work out. I loved this chapter great bridge. You are soo spoiling us with these chapters coming up so quick - thank you and thank your muse.

ravensword October 1 2006, 04:54:14 UTC

Thank you!

This was a necessary bridge to the next section...and yes, the whole John and Sam dynamic is going to be a very big part of upcoming sections.

I currently have either Sam or Dean in my head non-stop these days. I haven't figured out if that is a good thing or a bad thing...but it certainly leads to some very, very interesting dreams!

Thanks for reading!

anakin415 October 1 2006, 06:55:58 UTC

well hey I think its a good thing LOL

blaithacs October 1 2006, 04:38:35 UTC

i just realised you had posted two more parts so here i am.. X) (i first saw this fic on an update of the 11 part at spnnewsletter)
anyways, i really really liked it :)
guh, i think i need to friend this journal so i wan't miss updates..

ravensword October 1 2006, 04:56:09 UTC

I'm so happy that you found this...hmmm....rapidly growing epic and that you are enjoying it.

Please feel free to friend this journal. I don't friend back from here, since it's just my writing journal. But when I get the time, I'll likely swing by under this (amara_m...which is my main LJ) username and check your journal out!

jadedblue October 1 2006, 05:47:37 UTC

Little Sammy- 8 year old Sammy locked in a closet with demons? I almost want a flashback of that.... almost. Ohhh now I really do feel sad for the poor boy. This is beautiful...

ravensword October 1 2006, 14:28:10 UTC

There will be more revelation about little Sammy and what his childhood was like in the next bit, as well as more sex and....well, you'll see soon....

Thank you!

desiredeffect October 1 2006, 05:48:02 UTC

There will be like ... MORE, soon right?

You have me completely and utterly hooked on this thing, and somehow I fail to see it as a bad thing. Pity my school holidays are finishing so it involves WAITING even longer for these updates. I'm so impatient.

Poor Sam & John. They're so... connected, but completely disconnected from each other in a way that makes me want to smoosh both them together in a hug. (:

ravensword October 1 2006, 14:29:43 UTC

I hope to have part 14 up today, and maybe 15 tonight, dependent on how the day goes.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

batina35 October 1 2006, 07:09:53 UTC

This is feedback on both Chapters 12 and 13 - loved them both by the way. But two moments stand out in particular.

1) In Chapter 12, Dean's "you think you got it easy" diatribe. I loved him blurting all that out to Sam. His ranting was very warranted and very significant since it's not something he usually does.

2) In Chapter 13, the moment between John and Sam at the end of the chapter. That actually brought a tear to my eye it was beautiful. Sam needed to hear that John has always wanted him. And though it was painful, John needed to hear some of what Sam had to go through in order to understand what Sam had become.

Again, love both chapters. Can't wait for more...

ravensword October 1 2006, 14:31:40 UTC

Thank you.

Those are two of my favorite moments as well. John & Sam together is so hurty it takes my breath away...So much alike, so much pain, both really, really needing the other and neither of them able to say so....

I'm glad you liked.