My Brother's Keeper, Part 13 - Supernatural, NC-17

[phantisma]

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: My Brother's Keeper, Part Thirteen( Part One Here, Part Two Here, Part Three Here, Part Four Here, Part Five Here, Part Six Here, Part Seven Here, Part Eight Here, Part Nine Here, Part Ten Here, Part Eleven Here, Part Twelve HereCharacters/Pairing: Sam/Dean

Comments

[rory8]

Oh, poor Sam! *sigh* It's hard to know who I feel the saddest for. I really hope Sam gets better, that he sorts himself out somehow. And Dean. I think I want him to get over the hex he's under. But still love Sam. :)
Thank you. I enjoyed reading this, and am looking forward to reading more. :)

[ravensword]

Thank you for reading!

I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[cariadean]

Yay - found 2 chapters when I logged on today - I feel spoiled.
It's great that you're making Sam a more sympathetic character but please don't let him go soft ... I kind of like the way he was dominating Dean (a kink of mine) and though it would be great if/when they get back together there is a little more affection there I really don't want there to be too much of a change in the way they interract sexually with each other - am I asking too much? Maybe ....
Whichever way you intend for this to go I'm sure you'll do a great job - I am so enjoying this story that you could probably write this relationship anyway you feel like and I'll go for it ...
Thanks for the updates ... will try to reign in my impatience for more.

[cariadean]

Hope you don't mind but I've just added you to my FL .... don't quite know why it's taken this long ...

[ravensword]

Don't mind at all. This is my fan fic journal, so I don't friend back from here, but will swing by and possibly return friend from my main journal (amara_m).

Welcome to the nut house!

[ravensword]

Heh! I'm happy I could spoil you just a little bit!

I too have a sub!Dean sort of kink. They dynamic will change some, but I doubt Sammy will ever go completely sub. Of course, that's because I know some things all you folks don't, but will be learning shortly.

There's more hurty to come...and more sex...have fun!

[plutogirl10]

another really riveting chapter. You write sam really well, and it's obvious now how my perception of him has changed from the start of this series. very nicely done : )

[ravensword]

Thank you! That means a lot, because I am sometimes worried about how my Sam comes across. I've had Dean in my head so much more.

I'm working on the next bit...with the hot sex and a little more breaking...and you know...other stuff....

PS: Any word from our other beta?

[plutogirl10]

hot sex and breaking? yes please!

ps. no word from her yet, but shouldn't be too much longer. will let you know the minute i hear from her : )

[ravensword]

I'll cop to that. LOL...

[ravensword]

Yes and you love me for it.

[yvonnegos]

Oh gosh..poor Sammy..poor Dean..poor John..poor Dana..you are an angst queen huh? ;P

[ravensword]

Oh dear...did no one warn you of that? Yes, yes...angst whore queen of the world. I do love my whumped boys!

And fair warning for later parts of this verse, some of it was co-written with my friend shotofjack and is hosted in her journal, which is friends only.

If you comment on her journal or send her a private message and tell her that you are reading Keeper!Verse, she will most likely friend you to let you read those parts.

[yvonnegos]

Aw thanks! I will definitely do that! This is an awesome verse, and you're an awesome writer. I am definitely going to be busy with your stories for the next couple days. ;D