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Rawhide Chapter 11

May 21, 2007 18:09

Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine ( Read more... )

rawhide, au!au

Comments 32

thelastaerie May 21 2007, 23:23:02 UTC

WOW.. WOW... just. W.O.W.

That's some pent-up passion you got there. All these tension finally erupted. That;s more out of desperation, much like FNIT!

“Why can’t I stop feeling this way? Why I gotta want ya like this?” He asked his voice rough with too much emotion.

As confused and frustrated as Ennis might be... there's no stopping of this from now on, isn't it?

The long drive is going to be their Brokeback trip...

Eve

petitemiel May 22 2007, 02:08:00 UTC

Ennis is frustrated but mostly because he feels that he needs to better control himself around Jack so that he won't be putting them in danger. He's always been afraid that his desire will get the better of him in the wrong place in front of the wrong person so the fact that he couldn't control himself here just re-enforces that fear.

I think he's being a bit hard on himself though. When you keep too much inside for too long something eventually has to give, which is basically what happened here.

Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the feedback.

Rawhide 11 greatmtn May 21 2007, 23:46:24 UTC

PetiteMiel, a chapter with a lot happening. Jack and Ennis are like spontaneous combustion when they are near each other. They will have a much tougher time on the drive than any of the other cowboys.

greatmtn

Another wonderful chapter jacks_key May 22 2007, 00:27:19 UTC

I'm so glad they finally got to kiss, to relieve some of their tension!

Re: Another wonderful chapter petitemiel May 22 2007, 02:10:59 UTC

Well, kiss/dry hump you know it's all good. :) Yeah they managed to let off a bit of steam but I have a feeling it stoked the fires too.

kdough66 May 22 2007, 00:43:08 UTC

Totally hot! That's all I can say! I love this story and look forward to the next chapter!!

ifyoucantfixit1 May 22 2007, 01:02:33 UTC

I do love this story...I just dont see how they are going to keep getting away with this in front of the boys on the trail..They are going to have to spend a lot of time out in the canyons and trees, minding the herd at night, and hope they dont stampede over them,,,hehe Yee Haw janice

petitemiel May 22 2007, 02:12:49 UTC

Yes a stampede would be bad. LOL

mariez65 May 22 2007, 15:06:05 UTC

You beat me this time, Janice. :) LOL about the stampede. I love this story, too. And the last third of the chapter - WOW - talk about an unstoppable force of nature. Superbly written, Petite. Thanks, Marie