So, how's my driving?

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LISTEN UP, PEOPLE OF DISCEDO. I got an idea. A really good one.

Are there any sports teams here? Seriously, if only we'd had one when that one nation invaded or whatever! We could've just beat them in a game of baseball instead of everyone dying like that. Sports could solve all the problems, even if some of you do like to settle things the hard ( Read more... )

[the all too familiar sound of a ZZZZZZZZTT and then a sharp crack as the communicator hits the wall.]

Stupid-

[WHAM. And the sound of the device getting the absolute shit beat out of it.] -cking- [not that it really matters all too much, considering it's a completely insentient thing.] -thing!! [and in actuality, he really just ended up hurting ( Read more... )

[lo and behold, an utterly panicked voice coming through the communicator. loudly. and surprisingly stressed, which shouldn't be all too uncommon to hear in a place like this, but in any case:] ArrrRRGGH!! Crap, I'm dying! IT'S A GIANT BLUE PUNI!!! I can't feel my legs-!!Quick, someone help me!! It can't be a guy though, because only girly attacks ( Read more... )

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I died a few weeks ago! It kinda sucked, though then again I didn't really feel anything and I just came back, so I guess it didn't after all. But!! That DOES mean you can drink the water now. I would've said that earlier but I forgot, cuz I got more important things to do than look after everyone, y'know? RightA~ny~way~ I translated this chart I ( Read more... )

OII! LISTEN UP, WHOEVER ELSE IS IN THIS STUPID CITY!

[Hello, Discedo! Enjoying your peace? Well, hope you hadn't gotten too used to it yet, at least. The video's clicked on to show Sunohara pointing dramatically, looking otherwise completely serious; the feed itself shaking slightly.]

DON'T DRINK THE WATER!! IT'S LACED WITH DRUGS!━I know this ( Read more... )

"Use me," huh? Use you?! You don't even come with an instruction manual‼ If this is a kidnapping, I'm telling you you've got the wrong person! I also have, y'know, STUFF to go back to?! Cute Nagisa-chan is waiting for me, and Okazaki, and I don't really want to think about Kyou-chan but ━ I've got nothing to offer you, n-o-t-hhhh━

[a beat.]

━heee ( Read more... )

Name: Alep
LJ: prillid
E-Mail: fahcal [at] yahoo [dot] com
IM: alte rgenetix
Characters played at Discedo: whiteduplicity & virtualmenace

Character's Name: Youhei Sunohara (春原 陽平)
Series: Clannad
Timeline: End of episode eighteen of season one.
Canon Resource Link: Here, here, and here.

Personality: Sunohara's main purpose is to be a foil. That is, he's meant to bring out all ( Read more... )