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Bleach- "A New Day Dawning"

Dec 28, 2006 19:28

Title: A New Day Dawning
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: Dawn
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing/s: Ikkaku,Kira (light Ikkira and Shuumi if you want to see it), Yumichika, Shuuhei, Renji, Iba, Yachiru Kenpachi
Warnings/Spoilers: Spoilers for the SS arc.
Word Count: 1,857
Summary: Kira makes a New Year’s resolution-eleventh division style.
Dedication: ( Read more... )

shuuhei, yumichika, ikkakuxkira, kira, zaraki, bleach, shuuheixyumichika, renji, yachiru, ikkaku, iba

Comments 21

eurynome_on_ice December 29 2006, 03:50:02 UTC

New year is for everyone, no matter when they celebrate it. Only three more days to go. I'm kind of looking forward to it actually.

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New year is for everyone, no matter when they celebrate it. Only three more days to go. I'm kind of looking forward to it actually.

“Happy New Year,” he replied after a moment, and for the first time in a long time, looked forward tomorrow despite the knowledge that he’d wake up aching all over.

There should be a 'to' between 'forward' and 'tomorrow' me thinks.

And in the last line, there's a typo: 'new' not 'knew'.

Other than that, I didn't notice any other mistakes.

In case I don't get the chance later: HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 04:28:08 UTC

ROTFL I have the auto correct on my bro's computer to thank for that "knew" thing. IT IS SO INTELLIGENT REALLY. LOL

And I think some of the coding in your message got messed up and I can't see some things, but hopefully I got all the typos you pointed out? There were just the two, right?

eurynome_on_ice December 29 2006, 04:29:58 UTC

I tried to fix it and it went all kaplooie on me. Two mistakers. Yeppers.

peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 04:32:10 UTC

Excellent! Thanks.

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alita_b_angel December 29 2006, 04:05:35 UTC

Aw.... NEW YEAR FIC.

I feel like I've totally forgotten that new year is coming up. Thanks for the reminder.

Man, has this holiday season been busy.

This fic sends me into that happy place of glowy fight-squee. It's always so invigorating to see Kira grow a backbone. Like a flower opening or something.

peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 04:29:27 UTC

I know, I forgot until I saw a freaking COMMERCIAL about New Year's on TV yesterday morning. -_-;; LOL I am so up and up with things, sitting at home vegitating like I am. XD

Kira has more of a backbone in the anime I think, which was what I was trying to get at here. LOL he's more of a stick in the mud there too, but partying with the eleventh should loosen some things. XD

from jeina anonymous December 29 2006, 04:17:36 UTC

"Zaraki passed out snoring sometime after three am and his third seventy-to-one blindfolded try-and-punch-taichou’s-lights-out free-for-all contest. " & "Iba braided Renji’s hair"......*AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA* omg, a part of me died with laughter over those two lines~ my frikkin jaw hurts! good one lady, pretty little kira really needed the violence to cleanse his soul...you do realize that with the way youre makin things go, the 11th div. is turning into a rehab clinic? A DAMN FINE ONE I MUST ADD!

Re: from jeina peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 04:29:59 UTC

For some reason I just had to have Iba braid Renji's hair. I don't know why. LOL

sophiap December 29 2006, 04:20:18 UTC

Oh, delightful! I love how the fight affected Kira, and his whole outlook. For some reason, there's something amazingly squee-worthy about seeing pretty, pale Kira giving it his all in a full-out brawl.

peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 04:30:54 UTC

I think we all just want to see it, is why. At least, I do. I wanna believe there's more to him being a vice-captain than Gin liking his face, I guess. ^_^ I bet he could be a badass if he tried.

peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 05:35:07 UTC

ALSO, I am shallow because I would love to see him get down and dirty- he'd look great with a little blood on him, I think. XD

anonymous December 29 2006, 04:26:46 UTC

As per usual, impressive.

I love this line~ "Woah momma." Broke the tension nicely.

Hey, may I ask why you aren't ever on AIM? I've been meaning to ask if you'd read one of my own little drabbles of Bleach. I figure you'd be a good judge of if it's good enough to post or not.

Just a curiousity.

~Tama

peroxidepest17 December 29 2006, 04:31:47 UTC

Ikkaku is eloquent to the max. XD

If you don't see me on AIM you can always E-mail me if you'd like me to look at anything, though I don't know if I'm qualified as a judge for anything like that. I think only you can really decide when you want to post something or not. If you're happy with it, I would definitel go for it!