Bleach Drabble (472-474)

[peroxide_fic]

I R NOT DEAD? JUST STUPID.

472.

Title: Good Men
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: ShuuheixYumichika, Iba
Word Count: 998
Warning/s: Spoilers for the SS arc.
Summary: Shuuhei always was a good man.
Dedication: Since I didn’t have any idea what to write, I let myself be inspired by the ever inspiring sophiap-thanks for the ideas, lovely! Also for ainbthen-

Comments

[strigine]

SQUEE.

<-- sucker for cute cross-dressing stories, also "women's society". XD

Only edit, in first one: "“Of course he is,” the Ayasegawa sniffed"

Take out "the"?

[peroxidepest17]

One day, I will learn how to delete words properly. ONE DAY. XD;;

[chrysan]

*reads the 1st one and squees at the Kenpachi-brand of cuteness*

*reads the 2nd one* LOLZ. *LOVES* XDXDXDXD

*reads the 3rd one* *SNIGGERS*

And fancy Ikkaku mentioning that it's a convert operation~ Man, there was nothing covert about it. ^________^

[peroxidepest17]

They really weren't very subtle about it at all, were they? LOLZ Ikkaku.

[ainbthen]

Edit:

Shuuhei reminded himself that the man had been rescued from the eleventh division my Komamura -> by Komamura

[peroxidepest17]

HAHA I really can't type... I was too angst-filled with the fact that my computer didn't have internet? Yeah, that's it. Totally.

And Shuuhei and Iba and Komamura and Kenpachi and Tousen and that whole big mess with those poor neglected characters really kind of gets me going, I guess. They're fun to explore.

[sophiap]

Delightful! The second and third ones cracked me up (Shuuhei's "be gone when I get back" was particularly well-timed.) As for the first one, that was an interesting look into Shuuhei's way of thinking about it. People really do get pulled into believing that strong people with conviction are "great" men--you see it throughout history and you see it in politics today--and they are absolutely sincere in that belief. I liked that Iba could see the flaws in Shuuhei's reasoning even while drunk, and Yumichika's pointing out a key similarity between Zaraki and Shuuhei. Nicely done!

(BTW, your birthday drabble is close to being done).

[peroxidepest17]

I'm still trying to work around all he crap Shuuhei must have internalized after Tousen left-- his expressions in the manga told me he got effed up but that in the end he was still trying to be a good little soldier and fight for what was right. Even if he wasn't sure what that was, all the time.

He's so darling like that, I guess. Plus I have to admit it's fun to play Shuuhei off the 11th divisioners in that way because their philosophies are so outwardly different but in the end I think they're all striving for the same thing, even if none of them know it.

(AND YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!) ^_^

[rzyna]

These were all great, as always, but I particularlly liked the Women's Society! That was a great theory *grins* and I really liked the dynamic between the characters there! I think you did quite well with Nemu! The first was great too, especially with Shuuhei just not getting why he's great and that being part of what makes him great. It's really true! Thank you!

[peroxidepest17]

Haha i'm glad it seemed to work out okay... I still don't like writing Nanao and Nemu all that much because I kind of tend to project my impressions of them into it a little TOO MUCH I think. Nanao as a pushy bitch and Nemu as boring as watching grass grow. LOLz Though I guess for these purposes that worked in the end. >> Even though it took me like, eight tries. *dies* I'm just happy it's over, to be honest. XD

Thanks for reading!