Ouran- "Diametrically Opposed"

Jul 27, 2006 15:59

Title: Diametrically Opposed
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: vaguely KyouyaxTamaki, Renge, mentions of the other Host Club members
Word Count: 824
Warning/s: Silliness and OOC. Probably very random too.
Summary: Renge and the nature of opposing forces.
Dedication: electify’s request on my lj.
A/N: The theme requested was: “Resistance.” Does this ( Read more... )

haruhi, mori, kyouya, ouran, renge, kyouyaxtamaki, tamaki, twins, honey

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icebluesilver July 28 2006, 00:01:14 UTC
“Butbutbutbut… Kyouya can be wicked!” Tamaki looked up at his vice-president with big eyes, tugging pathetically on his sleeve. “Ne, Kyouya…be wicked!”

Kyouya adjusted his glasses. “As you wish.”

And then promptly proceeded to ignore Tamaki completely.

“NOT TO ME!!”

HAR HAR HAR XD And small thing but I'm so glad you don't stick an 'e' at the end of 'blond' for Tamaki. It's one of those tiny things that drive me nuts when I read 'that blonde boy' XD

“Please do something that would justify the tears, ne?” She sparkled.

Kyouya sparkled back, and Tamaki felt his blood run cold. “Of course.” He turned then, and his glasses gleamed menacingly at the quivering blond in his arms. Gently, he cupped Tamaki’s chin between his thumb and index finger and as he leaned closer, thought of all the money they were going to make from this.

..........Sparklesparkle and fizzle. XD Thought of all the money they'd make from that indeed... XD

Oh, weird thing too. I think Internet's always capitalised, for some reason.

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peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 00:59:56 UTC
Huh, is it? I guess it doesn't matter to me either way. XD The intranets is the intranets. *snicker* Glad you liked. ^_^

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thrance_86 July 28 2006, 04:04:57 UTC
' I'm so glad you don't stick an 'e' at the end of 'blond' '
It's the same thing you know. It's just one's American spelling, one's British.

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peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 04:09:19 UTC
I think I switch back and forth periodically, just cuz I'm an inconsistent bastard, but just so I know, which is which? o.o

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bellezainfantil July 28 2006, 00:44:08 UTC
NO WAY. You like KyouyaxTamaki. I thought my friend and I were the only ones. In the world. Really. *parties*
Also: “Perfect! It’s so perfect!!!” Renji declared, and true to her word, the compilation photo album that resulted from that day’s shoot far outsold all others in the Host Club’s illustrious history.

I think you meant to write Renge instead of Renji. Bleach on your mind much?
^^

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peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 00:59:24 UTC
Bleach usually is on my mind, yes. Though oddly, I don't think of Renji that much, because I don't like him that much. Haha maybe my fingers are just more used to typing his name than Renge's thus far. >>

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tenshineechan July 28 2006, 01:41:42 UTC
Kyouya very gently pushed Tamaki back a little bit, jus enough to slip a handkerchief between the blond’s watery eyes ...

You missed the letter t in just.

Also you capitalised shanghai turning it into a noun, thereby making it a location as opposed to a synonym for kidnapping.

All niggling aside, I loved this piece. As always your characterisations are on par as well as unique and your humour is evident.

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peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 01:51:41 UTC
Thanks for the edits! I'm too lazy to find them myself. XD

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pajee July 28 2006, 04:22:01 UTC
Kyouya's so gay for Tamaki. xD

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peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 04:31:17 UTC
NO JOKE. XD

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eclectify July 28 2006, 07:48:49 UTC
*sparkles at you*

Much love for Renge's bellowing and Kyouya's evilness and Wibble Master Tamaki.

*happily hoards fic* Thank you Pero-pero!!!

...and I need Ourans icons

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peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 18:27:48 UTC
I need Ouran icons too. XD

Glad you liked!

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