Title: Diametrically Opposed
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: vaguely KyouyaxTamaki, Renge, mentions of the other Host Club members
Word Count: 824
Warning/s: Silliness and OOC. Probably very random too.
Summary: Renge and the nature of opposing forces.
Dedication:
electify’s request on my lj.
A/N: The theme requested was: “Resistance.” Does this
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Kyouya adjusted his glasses. “As you wish.”
And then promptly proceeded to ignore Tamaki completely.
“NOT TO ME!!”
HAR HAR HAR XD And small thing but I'm so glad you don't stick an 'e' at the end of 'blond' for Tamaki. It's one of those tiny things that drive me nuts when I read 'that blonde boy' XD
“Please do something that would justify the tears, ne?” She sparkled.
Kyouya sparkled back, and Tamaki felt his blood run cold. “Of course.” He turned then, and his glasses gleamed menacingly at the quivering blond in his arms. Gently, he cupped Tamaki’s chin between his thumb and index finger and as he leaned closer, thought of all the money they were going to make from this.
..........Sparklesparkle and fizzle. XD Thought of all the money they'd make from that indeed... XD
Oh, weird thing too. I think Internet's always capitalised, for some reason.
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It's the same thing you know. It's just one's American spelling, one's British.
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Also: “Perfect! It’s so perfect!!!” Renji declared, and true to her word, the compilation photo album that resulted from that day’s shoot far outsold all others in the Host Club’s illustrious history.
I think you meant to write Renge instead of Renji. Bleach on your mind much?
^^
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You missed the letter t in just.
Also you capitalised shanghai turning it into a noun, thereby making it a location as opposed to a synonym for kidnapping.
All niggling aside, I loved this piece. As always your characterisations are on par as well as unique and your humour is evident.
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Much love for Renge's bellowing and Kyouya's evilness and Wibble Master Tamaki.
*happily hoards fic* Thank you Pero-pero!!!
...and I need Ourans icons
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Glad you liked!
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