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Eyeshield 21 Drabble (8)

Jul 25, 2006 15:16

HAHA I AM SO LAME.

8.

Title: Forward Motions
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: JyuumonjixSena, vague references at HirumaxMamori
Word Count: 451
Warning/s: OOC, fluff, sap, etc., etc…. no real spoilers though.
Summary: Locker room memories.
Dedication: for seca’s request on my lj.
A/N: The theme of the request was “locker room”… I could have done ( Read more... )

hirumaxmamori, jyuumonjixsena, eyeshield 21

Comments 20

chibik July 25 2006, 23:12:52 UTC

SO CUTE! ♥ Now you just need to write the virginity-loss part >>

peroxidepest17 July 26 2006, 07:14:47 UTC

Haha oh maaan JyuuxSen seems like such a sweetly innocent pairing... I think I'd have to READ smex for it before I could imagine writing it. o.o But it's pretty either way! XD

renji_fan1185 July 26 2006, 00:23:29 UTC

...i go put in my memories now...

*love*

peroxidepest17 July 26 2006, 07:15:18 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you like! ^^

seca July 26 2006, 01:15:06 UTC

Thank you for writing this. I'm definitely in the mood for writing JyuuSena again. Hopefully I'll finish something for them tonight. ^^

peroxidepest17 July 26 2006, 07:15:48 UTC

Yay, as long as you liked it it's all good then! Can't wait to see more from you. ^^

soloproject July 26 2006, 02:45:44 UTC

prs to be writing a sequel

peroxidepest17 July 26 2006, 07:16:43 UTC

Maaaybe. Though it's unlikely to involve pron quite yet. >> Like I said above, this is one of those pairings I'll probably have to read smut for before I'll be able to write it myself. *rolls* it's just so sweet and fluffy and cute!

soloproject July 26 2006, 15:04:07 UTC

LOL, forget that last comment, I was actually trying to comment on someone else and didn't realize thanks to my major headache. >>;;;

But yes, Ouran porn = no. Juumonji Sena ponr = HELLZ YEAH. :D

tsumibito_san July 26 2006, 03:00:56 UTC

Like everything you write, this is absolutely fantastic. I LOVED the fact that Jyuumonji was so nervous that he kept his helmet on. I really like it when writers include quirky details like that - and Sena standing on a bench so he can hear someone is a funny mental image. And the way their first kiss worked out. The last two lines are great; if I hadn't already loved this from the start, I would have fallen for just those.

peroxidepest17 July 26 2006, 07:17:58 UTC

Hehe I figured Jyuu is such a complete and utter dork that he'd have to do something like that with his helmet on-- it's like a shield or something. XD I'm really happy you enjoyed the fic! I was kind of nervous about it since it was so sugar-coated fluff. XD