Writing update

[patosan]

I was just having a quick read through the one-shot I'm writing at the moment, but I had to stop. Really, it's bad >_< It's boring, it's cliched, it's stale. The narrative has no zest, it's choppy and slow-paced

Comments

[bakayaro_onna]

I cannot imagine you writing something cliched and boring - you just don't do that.

[patosan]

You give me more credit than I deserve! XD

In any case, I said I wouldn't look at it, and what am I doing right now? Looking at it. I'm incorrigible >_>

I might just make it work, still. Might ^__^