Feb 07, 2006 19:12
I was just having a quick read through the one-shot I'm writing at the moment, but I had to stop. Really, it's bad >_< It's boring, it's cliched, it's stale. The narrative has no zest, it's choppy and slow-paced.
Perhaps it's because I'm not in the right frame of mind for it. I need to find some good music to put me in the mood, maybe. I probably won't write anymore tonight. I need to let it rest and try and breath some fresh air into it tomorrow. Or something.
Currently it's standing under 3,000 words. Let's hope I can get somewhere with it *fingers crossed* I want to get it out of my HD, it's been there too long. Almost a year >_>
Edit (Five hours later):
I couldn't keep away. I'm terrible, I know. But the good news is I've figured out a way to savage it. It's flowing more smoothly now and I know exactly where I'm going with it. All I need still is a tittle. So far I'm refering to it as With Heart and Dormi maintenut, but I don't like either of those names. Not really. Now i'm off to bed because my back hurts :(
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