And I Must Spork: Maradonia, Part IX

[pariah164]

Part nine already? Hot damn. Next few chapters are a bit on the long side, so bear with me.

Comments

[ieatbacon]

w00t for Maya slapping Joey upside the head. He's been deserving that for how many chapters now? XD

I still feel, however, that not even that can make up for the rest of this monstrosity.....

[aki_the_wingly]

Not to defend Gloria, but I can see a voice like waves hitting the beach. I think that's a creative simile. Very original too

[almighty_patsy]

Apparently, King Pollo's men come down once a year and try to take any kid younger than seven.
Emphasis on TRY, I guess. They mustn't be very good at it if they have to come back a year later and take away more children. Shouldn't the only kidnappees be those born since their last visit?

Maya got so angry about Joeys interruption that she smacked Joey right in the face with the backside of her hand.
:O STUNNED SILENCE