i'm all up for a war against my own heart

[oxygenlove]

Title: All Under Control
Pairing: G-Ri
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Old issues, not beta'd
Summary: Jiyong's thinking and Seungri is scheming. Neither succeeds.
AN: I'll be extremely happy if anybody gets what I'm trying to say. And happy birthday to me!!!~

Comments

[peligr0]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRIZZA i texted you btw :)

will read this now hehe.

[oxygenlove]

oh! thank you. my phonee's broken right now, though :(

[peligr0]

ok commenting back. this is late, forgive me.

ok uhmmm when i first read it, it broke my heart a little. i think it's about both of them scared of rejection. jiyong, he thinks too much. lives for meaning in everything that seungri does. if by chance there'll be something in seungri's actions & words that might reveal a chance if they can be something more than friends. seungri, he thinks too much as well that in effort to protect himself he just categorize the things he does as "fanservice". lol that's what i think?... XD

and i dunno why but this reminds me of bloc party's this modern love. hehe

and omg drarry = drari hahaha perfect. even though i don't ship drarry i still think it's cute. cannot wait for the movie

HOPE YOU HAD A WONDERFUL BIRTHDAY <3.

[stupidefleurk]

SPOT!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRIZZA !!!<333

[oxygenlove]

thank you ♥

[lilacblossoms]

Yay! I was just about to write you a happy bithday msg when I saw that you are indeed still alive and kicking although I haven't seen you around for a while.

Happy birthday, I hope it has been a good day!

Now I'll read. :D

[oxygenlove]

oh! that's very sweet :D birthday notes! but yes, i'm still alive, haha! just barely.
a good day. erhm, holed up at home finishing papers and documentaries due tomorrow... not really my idea of a birthday celebration but - ! I'll live. HAHA.
thank you ♥

[lilacblossoms]

Aaaw, this story! It's interesting that it can be read in both an angsty and in a fluffy way. Suits the mood no matter what.

These two don't really know how intertwined they are, how big of a part Seungri has in Jiyongs self. Beautiful! It gets better the more I read it.

[oxygenlove]

Yes! It is fluffy in an angsty way. It's... I'm actually curious as to how people interprets it. Since I had someone read it and her take on it was different from what I had in mind when I wrote it.

Seungri occupies a big part of Jiyong, I don't know if they are aware.

I'm planning on revising this, not in a major way but just smoothing out the edges :)

Thankyou so so so much for reading!

<3

[kori_no_ojo]

i greeted you in FB unnie.. but i guess you won't open your acct. lol..

and i'm too shy to text your mom.. though i know her no. keke

and i've been waiting for this chance...

HAPPY BDAY UNNIE!!! ILOVEYOUALWAYSANDFOREVAHHHH!!! <3

i love this fic.. :D

though Ri is just doing it for fanservice... Jiyong thinks it's perfect for it has become real for him. i mean, he already fell in love. awwwww.. T___T

will i see yah tomorrow unnie? for the paper? i wanna hug yah for your bday! :D

<3

Re: <3

[oxygenlove]

yep, you are right! i haven't checked my FB yet. and my mom'll probably not be happy with that texting thing.

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ♥

I'm glad you liked it, lol. I thought no one would.
I guess this could be interpreted in different ways. It's true that I didn't really write anything of Seungri's side, or indicated anything that might let us see things from his perspective so whatever floats your boat then :D

Yep, Math 11 finals! And what time do we need to pass the docus and papers exactly?

Re: &lt;3

[kori_no_ojo]

um, i'm not sure though. T_T i think, it's posted as events in our FB page for BehSci 2012.. i think.. o.o

oh.. of course i love it! hahahah!! see, i wrote my comment, coz it's you!! :D more often than not, i'm just a lurker. haha!

take a glimpse of your FB.. your wall is already flooded with words of love. :D

Re: &lt;3

[oxygenlove]

I HAVE PASSED A GREAT HURDLE! NO MORE SIMBULAN-DOCUS AND PAPERS!

Just had to get that out :)

Aw, I'm glad you un-lurked! Yep, I looked but I an't reply just now :( Still busy! Though I'm procrastinating here. Haha!

[justcallmepriya]

Hello :)

I just wanted to comment and say that this was really lovely.
I enjoyed how Seungri was making the plans and Jiyong's all "yes Seungri yes"
:D

"I think it's perfect."

No matter how crazy, this is perfect.

and that part = <3

HAPPY BIRTHDAY by the way, I hope you have a lovely day
:DDD

[oxygenlove]

Thank you!

I never really got to celebrate my birthday as I was holed up that day at home, writing papers and editing docus.

Lol, call me biased but would you believe that in that gif, I was staring at Bae's sexy back? Hehe, sorry tabi and gd...

YES H/D OMG DO YOU READ H/D????????

[justcallmepriya]

I'm sorry you celebrated your birthday writing papers and editing :|
But I hope you were able to finish your work...

BWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! Not going to lie, I wouldn't blame you at all, Youngbae's back is so.damn.beautiful! But I'll always enjoy how Jiyong's doing some crazy dance in the background...and whatever Tabi's doing, well that's just questionable!

and yeah, I READ H/D :) *is a fellow h/d shipper* It was the first slash pairing I got in to :DD I will always love them.
I mean it is blatantly obvious that Draco and Harry are in love, even though they fight like a married couple, they will.always.love.each.other!...*rambles on about H/D* :) You have not seen me watching a HP film, I'm literally sat there slashing them together...*blinks* :D

[oxygenlove]

It was a gloomy birthday but peaceful in a way. Just me :)
And I did. I finished everything!

Bae's back is art. I have Hwangssabu's testimony. Haha.

OMG YOU READ H/D???????
I have a thousand H/D fics saved on my comp and I have a link full of H/D stuff here: H/D goodies and things that prove I am Slytherin and Draco biased!!!

H/D is tension all over the pages of every HP book. I mean, JKR obviously isn't aware that she's writing slash but haha, she totally was. HBP movie was an H/D movie. It is.