[chaptered] beyond the stars pt. 4

[ouji]

Title: Beyond the Stars
Author: daigensha_akuma
Genre: AU, Supernatural, Romance, slight humor
Pairing: YunJae, Yoosu, Minfood.
Length: (4/? + epilogue)
Plot: given by gaypop; here
A/N: Un-beta AKA no good!!
Summary: Some people say creatures from another planet exist and some don't. They could be spying on everyone on earth from another planet, another country,

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spot for soulmate

[ouji]

sort of weird tone :/

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[kawaiineyo4]

the build-up is coming along nicely. i didn't expect for you to switch from the bathroom to yunho standing outside freezing to death, a bad day much. i knew it was changmin immediately and i love his introduction into the story and what a coincidence that he managed to black out outside of jaejoong's door, the object of his affections. i would have been like jaejoong too, 'um, there is someone on our couch any idea who it is, because it's freaking me out?' though i'm just paranoid like that in general. lol. he disappeared? what? where did he go. :)

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[ouji]

i was afraid this turned out dull or something because of the sudden scene change from yunho appearing and jaejoong watching him o__o!! well i though someone would at least question that and you seem to be the only one who did xD yup, i always want yunho to be somewhere near jaejoong :) and yes, i imagine the couch as a real life situation so that part came out better than i thought! lol i hope yunho doesn't disappear too much because most likely i'm going to have yunho reveal that most likely on the next one xD thank you dearest!

spot for gaypop

[ouji]

saved just in case :)

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[dongwook]

Where did Ho go?!

Wow, I am loving this! And lol Min <3333 sanck chu

Re: spot for gaypop

[ouji]

haha don't know. only uknow yunho knows! >:D and no, thank you for coming ;)

SPOT FOR:

[ouji]

youngsoongi, ldyxdavil,takelo14

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[takelo14]

Omo!!! I was expecting jae to flip out when he finds yunho! I didn't see the whole disappearing thing coming :O lol yunho's actions are so cute :3 I just wanna hug him :D and the word warbling is so heartwarming <3

Even so, I find yunho to be such a creeper xD inabsolutely love that about him :)

Thanks for the update dear <3333

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[ouji]

haha i was expecting yunho to be there too but then that meant i would have to continue this even further than it should ;~; i was getting pretty sleepy so it was either update this now or later xD and i chose now lol but at least i know what i should do next so maybe the update will be quicker :) just hope i could write it out ;-; indeed, yunho is hugable! lol

i dunno, i tend to write about yunho or jaejoong stalking each other, which i find uncreative since i like to circle around those themes! Q__Q

anyway, when will you update? xD just curious since i haven't seen much from you lately :D

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[takelo14]

LOL i understand xD i write at night as well :P
oh don't worry, you'll be able to write anything that you want :) im really bad at writing sci-fi so you can not possibly be worse than mine (seriously... dont worry yourself)

lol its ok, i like writing about them stalking eachother too, its just that im not very good at it xD instead i focus i angst (obviously =_=")

oh yeah, im actually working on chapter 13 (oh lord) im thinking about writing a battle scene (since it IS called 'the warrior elite'...) but im worried about what to afterwards. and the whole yoochun's brother thing is really bothering me right now... i mean i already have everyone in place, but i dont have the ending and i'm not sure if yoochun's family tree would work if i do what i plan to do. (its really hard to explain without ruining it for you. i dont want you to be mad at me >.< )

[oh_taetae]

Mine :~

[oh_taetae]

"There was no one there."
IT'S MAGIC~~~~ now Yunho will show up in the closet (?)
Okay, I really wondered what happens to him ): - some kind of alien teletransport? :~

[ouji]

lol indeed it's magic! :D *gets bricked* haha you shall soon find out where yunho have gone and it'll most likely be revealed in the next one 8)

thank you for reading~

[linhchipham]

Now that's a surprise. I seriously hate cilff hanger.Update soon,plzzzzz.

[ouji]

haha i dislike them too but i think this is the first agonizing one i've tried D'8 (GASP) though since i've got a better sense on how to continue it'll probably be updated soon :D thank you for reading XD