[chaptered] beyond the stars pt. 4

[ouji]

Title: Beyond the Stars
Author: daigensha_akuma
Genre: AU, Supernatural, Romance, slight humor
Pairing: YunJae, Yoosu, Minfood.
Length: (4/? + epilogue)
Plot: given by gaypop; here
A/N: Un-beta AKA no good!!
Summary: Some people say creatures from another planet exist and some don't. They could be spying on everyone on earth from another planet, another country,

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[ouji]

youngsoongi, ldyxdavil,takelo14

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[takelo14]

Omo!!! I was expecting jae to flip out when he finds yunho! I didn't see the whole disappearing thing coming :O lol yunho's actions are so cute :3 I just wanna hug him :D and the word warbling is so heartwarming <3

Even so, I find yunho to be such a creeper xD inabsolutely love that about him :)

Thanks for the update dear <3333

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[ouji]

haha i was expecting yunho to be there too but then that meant i would have to continue this even further than it should ;~; i was getting pretty sleepy so it was either update this now or later xD and i chose now lol but at least i know what i should do next so maybe the update will be quicker :) just hope i could write it out ;-; indeed, yunho is hugable! lol

i dunno, i tend to write about yunho or jaejoong stalking each other, which i find uncreative since i like to circle around those themes! Q__Q

anyway, when will you update? xD just curious since i haven't seen much from you lately :D

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[takelo14]

LOL i understand xD i write at night as well :P
oh don't worry, you'll be able to write anything that you want :) im really bad at writing sci-fi so you can not possibly be worse than mine (seriously... dont worry yourself)

lol its ok, i like writing about them stalking eachother too, its just that im not very good at it xD instead i focus i angst (obviously =_=")

oh yeah, im actually working on chapter 13 (oh lord) im thinking about writing a battle scene (since it IS called 'the warrior elite'...) but im worried about what to afterwards. and the whole yoochun's brother thing is really bothering me right now... i mean i already have everyone in place, but i dont have the ending and i'm not sure if yoochun's family tree would work if i do what i plan to do. (its really hard to explain without ruining it for you. i dont want you to be mad at me >.< )

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[ouji]

lol how can yo ube bad at writing sci- fi?! from what i can see you are writing 'the warrior elite' and it's pretty good so far! ;~; heck, even longer than min OTL

but stalking involves angst too xD! (don't know what point i'm making OTL) i simply adore your writing style, like seirously *______________*

oh wow an actual battle scene! :D you don't have to explain dearie~ ^^ as much as i like spoilers, it's totally up to you :D so why would i be mad? o.o;; am i crazy? LOL

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[takelo14]

i dont know, i feel like im REALLY repetitive... *blush* you're too nice :) but im really glad you like it :D

*hug* you got me all fired up to write and finish chapter 13 >///<
i like your writing too! its so creative and new! its fresh :)

yup, i remembered that i need some action too right? lol no, im probably the crazy one... im trying to cut back on the angst. i dont want to bore people... i hope i dont ruin it >.<

p.s. i cant wait till you post up another fanart :)
i've been working on this portrait of Yunho, im gonna post it in a little while ^_^

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[ouji]

haha i feel much more repeitive than you :) it's why i don't write much because of my very uncreative words OTL

LOL i hope you do write it because i was thinking of writing today too but i'm having second thoughts on whether i will finish this or now! o___o!!

i think alot of the angst were necessary in the story and i think you are right that there should be less later on ^^ though your skills in writing angst is still endearing so don't give up on it too much! :D *hugs*

omo~ i dunno when i'll post another fanart because i haven't been updating properly since my mind have been scattered laterly =~=;; it's really tough to think about them so freely OTL and omg! i can't wait to see your yunho portraint! :D

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[youngsoongi]

omg!!! poor Yunnie - he's at the wrong appartment, with no keys - no nothing!

free porn LOL - at this line from Min

JJ's reaction - priceles

AND OMG - where's YunHo???

will CM and JJ find out about YH 'secret'?

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[ouji]

IKR! it's very sad for yunho ;____; ut he had to meet min somehow >:D (well sort of...)

ohhh your jaemin icon suits this chapter so perfectly! xD indeed it's a shocker and i tried not to be repetitive so yunho won't really disappear anymore from not on lol (well i hope o.o;;)

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[ldyxdavil]

wow... that was sooooooooooo unexpected.
yunho disappearing.
but yeah... changmin being jae's roommate is better than what i had in mind.
haha.. np!
i'm always here to help you out whenever u need me. ^^

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[ouji]

haha thank you for all your help! ^^ and yeah i thought i made yunho disappear alot lately but i hope the rest turns out well! :) thanks for being here~ :D (hugs)

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[ldyxdavil]

lol... this is what friends are for. *hugs back*