You're Welcome, Goddaddy Jake

Dec 07, 2008 23:51

 Rating: PG-13 for language (so far)
Summary: Leah and her “harpiness” helps Jacob in his time of need, but accidently reveals a secret. Jake POV.
A/N: If Nessie was instead born a boy and Bella went through with naming him Edward Jacob (no imprinting!) This takes place right after the *shudders* birth scene and Jacob knows that Bella is in the ( Read more... )

fic, twilight, blackwater, jacob black

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edenesque December 8 2008, 05:43:05 UTC
aha, this is a cool idea. i like your leah. you should continue this! :D the dialogue is funny. and yes, bella cannot name for nuts. and i agree, it was mean to name her kid after jacob. =_=

anyway, keep writing! this is awesome.

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oscargirl08 December 9 2008, 03:30:47 UTC
Thanks for reading! I'm really glad you like my Leah, too. Stay tuned, more is on the way!

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the_aloha_girl December 8 2008, 06:07:55 UTC
The thought-dialogue between Jacob and Lean is a little confusing towards the end, but I really like the concept for this story. This has potential; stick with it! :)

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oscargirl08 December 9 2008, 03:32:18 UTC
Thanks for reading I'm posting more soon. I'll be a bit more careful about the thought dialogue-thanks for letting me know about that :)

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rosegilmore December 8 2008, 19:11:32 UTC
Sounds like an awesome beginning. I'm looking forward to what comes next!

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oscargirl08 December 9 2008, 03:32:35 UTC
Thanks! Stay tuned!

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