One for the Money [oneshot]

[orionsroad]

Title: One for the Money
Rating: PG13 ('for more mature themes' *gigglesnort*)
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1,402
Genre: ...drama? Maybe? What do you call this??
Summary: There's a pretty man waiting for him at the reception desk, ready to make his night whatever he wants it to be.
A/N: Nobody's posting on detox. *pouts* I dunnos if it's because it's exam

Comments

[crystelle05]

ahhhh i should've realized it earlier....
not seeing each other for awhile, the somewhat formal speech between them, the smoking....
ughh....i'm so slow ><
but yeah, i can totally see them in a relationship (if you can call it that) like this.
i loved how you described everything from what they wore to the surroundings and the atmosphere of the place....gave the story such a realistic feel.
very nice! <3

[orionsroad]

I tried to make it at least a little ambigious towards the start, but yeah, Jae's a host. ^^; But thank you - I'm glad you liked the descriptions and such, and enjoyed it! :D Thanks for reading!

[kawaiineyo4]

This was really sweet, it was like I was watching a preview of some highly anticipated drama, I liked how you described the going on's. I really do like your writing style it's so effortless, you know what I mean? And I totally get what you're saying, when I posted LWS yesterday and saw that my birthday post was still on the page I was like, 'Where's all the fic?'

Thank-you, really enjoyed this! <333!

[orionsroad]

Aww, thank you! *hugs* It's flattering to hear you like my style. :D Effortless! haha, hardly, but it's a nice compliment, thank you!

Ah! I know, so sad! The comm usually gets upwards of 10 posts a day, but it's been really slow recently. Fingers crossed it'll pick back up soon! I need a steady flow of jaeho fic! hehe.

♥

[pinkelatta]

Ahh finally you write!

Yes, somewhat quiet here eh. Perhaps I should transplant my Soompi fic here too...

It's sweet that Jae still serves Yunho, but why doesn't the relationship go any further, is my question. Haiz... my heart is heavy now, after they part - isn't Jae's???

Grace <3
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[orionsroad]

I know, I'm slack. ;_; I need to get a move on with Other Side. Damn thing is killing me.

Oooh, you have another fic going?! You should post it on detox too! I don't go to forums, so this is my main source of Jaeho. ^^;

... as for why they're still the same as they are, well, unfortunatly I think that's how it goes a lot of the time in life. It's a job and a role and how they're used to behaving. Those two have been playing their parts like that for a long time I think. Maybe both have given up on it being anything more? Maybe they're just waiting for it to happen? Up to you! XD

♥

[kai_yukashi]

aa, it's beautiful and sensual but so oddly melancholy. i hope i'm not just making that part up? it is meant to be bittersweet, yes? Very very pretty, and I really like that bittersweet feeling, the have yet not have, jae who's always waiting for him, and yunho who has to leave the "fantasy" eventually every time.

[kai_yukashi]

*snort* geezus i really should see who writes stuff before i read and comment away. you're one of my fav writers, and I'm not surprised to see it was you who wrote this. thanks for your comments on my other fics too. keep writing! weren't you the one who was writing a Yunjae pooltable smut...? O___o or did i get the author wrong? there were two floating around, but one of them was unfinished 3 parter with only 2 parts done...?

[orionsroad]

♥ You're the orginator of the host!Jae idea! I love your fic... I can so see him like that (er, kinda sadly actually, given the job. ^^;), all smooth and stuff. XD

I hope your host Jae doesn't end up always waiting, but then, Yunho knows better then the 'fantasy', so hopefully...? *crosses fingers*

Aw, thanks! I'm really flatered you like my stuff - I really enjoy your fics too. ^_^ I wasn't actually the one writing that Pool!Smut fic - though I do know the one you mean (I really hope the third part turns up sometime too!). I've written a lot of other smut though. ^^; half my fics seem to be smutty. hem.

[kai_yukashi]

okay well you ARE teh author of some of my favs anyway, sorry for mixing it up. i was just rereading some of your old fics after reading this one. XD and it's good to write smutty stuff`~~~~ i wish i can write smut, but it's like impossible for me to actually do it. x___x I'm SO tempted to write this OT5 with Junsu in the middle pure pron, but i can't make myself do it. x___x

[cereza_gakuto]

ohhH!
Jae was a host? (is that the word?)

:O and Yunnie was his client =/

it's sad =S
I don't know
like angst? =S

made me =(
Jae just smile but he doesn't happy, right?

<3333333333333333333

ash!

[orionsroad]

Yes, host is the right word! And Yunho was his client... it was a bit sad, that they were just in their roles.

I don't know if Jae is happy or not. Poor thing, I don't give him much happiness. :( *hugs Jae*

♥ Thanks for reading!!