One for the Money [oneshot]

[orionsroad]

Title: One for the Money
Rating: PG13 ('for more mature themes' *gigglesnort*)
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1,402
Genre: ...drama? Maybe? What do you call this??
Summary: There's a pretty man waiting for him at the reception desk, ready to make his night whatever he wants it to be.
A/N: Nobody's posting on detox. *pouts* I dunnos if it's because it's exam

Comments

[ex_isamijae994]

Nya~ another one-shot! (glee~!!)

Now I have an urge to eat strawberries. :P No drinks or smoke for me! I'm underage ^__^

I love you for writing! <333

*suddenly feels guilty for not posting*

[orionsroad]

No smoking even if you're over age!! >:+ It's BAD. *waggles finger* Drinking and strawberries and sugar are okay. Erm. All in moderation though. ehehe. XD

Hey, don't feel guilty! You've had wayyyyy more important things on your mind! And you have been writing, so you won't just stop updating when you do post! (hem, like, er, me... ^^;;;) Don't be sorry. *huggles*

[oncloud999]

damn that was so sexy, seriously, you can really build a nice atmosphere. =) good job!

thanks for writing! i always enjoy reading your stuff. ♥

[orionsroad]

Aw, thanks! So glad you like it! ^_^ And thanks for reading - I always enjoy reading your comments! XD

[blurmeese]

He takes a lazy puff of the cigarette, the rush of nicotine and heat in his lungs like a mellowed aphrodisiac in his blood.

AHHHH *happyhappyflail* I love that line. This is such a....suave, sexy fic. Great atmosphere, with cigarette smoke and low lights and smooth conversation. XDD

They talk in lazy, low voices until the strawberries come, and Yunho gets a dab of sugar, a dribble of juice and a long, simmering kiss.

*drops dead* Jae as a host (is that the word?) and Yunho as his client brings up wonderful, pretty images and there's just this *something* always simmering under the words here. Oh gawd. Firstborn child for you!

[orionsroad]

I like that sentance too. XD Despite being bad bad bad, smoking can also be kinda sexy. >_<;;

Yup yup, Jae's a host. Dunno what's going on with him and Yunnie though... s'up yo you! ;D

O_o A baby...! I wouldn't know what to do with it. But thanks for the thought, hehe. ♥♥

[ycsbrain]

ahh i can imagine everything in my head..and it's niceeee

i refuse to read the other fic you posted!!

[orionsroad]

haha! I don't blame you, the other is a bit depressing! This one, not so much. Glad you liked at least this one!!

[fallofdark]

I like this drabble, mostly because of how comfortable they seem to be around each other. Your portrayal left a lot up to the mind of the readers where there may be more to JaeHo in this than meets the eye or if they are just on the borderline before romance.

Love it ♥

[orionsroad]

I think it could really be taken a number of ways, in their relationship. It could be just business (ew, how unromatic! ^^;) or as you say, that there is something there, or could be something there in the future. Up to you. hehe.

I like comfortable!Jaeho. Infact, I like comfortable!DBSK - that's one of the things I enjoy about the band, how easily they interact and how comfortable they are with each other, no matter what. ♥