One for the Money [oneshot]

[orionsroad]

Title: One for the Money
Rating: PG13 ('for more mature themes' *gigglesnort*)
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1,402
Genre: ...drama? Maybe? What do you call this??
Summary: There's a pretty man waiting for him at the reception desk, ready to make his night whatever he wants it to be.
A/N: Nobody's posting on detox. *pouts* I dunnos if it's because it's exam

Comments

[vanny92]

Ah..
That was smexy.
Hahaha.

Strawberries and champagne are the ultimate Jaeho things for me. I don't know why.
I always associate Jaejoong with strawberries.
Weird.
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Nice one!
<3

[orionsroad]

I was so tempted to go with raspberries instead, but strawberries are less messy and are traditional with champagne. So strawberries it was! I think strawberries match with Jae so well because they're both... er, sensual. XD And of course, there's the lovely imagery of him eating those big fat strawberries from that day trip they did in Japan. :D:D:D

♥ to you too!

[crimeis]

;__; I swear I could die a happy love sick fool. And how nice the imagery was with strawberries and champagne, the smokes and what not. :]

Until next time it is! Looking forward for more of your writings. [♥]

[orionsroad]

XD ♥~

I hate smoking, really, but yeah. Seemed to go with the atmosphere. XD

[mimei]

mmm strawberries and champagne.

acutally i found this rather tragic
assuming Jaejoong is a host.
but i'm probably just being cynical ^ ^;;

seriously though, where HAS all the fic gone lately? ;A;

[orionsroad]

It is a bit tragic. Yes, he's a host - has been for a long while, though I did have the sort of half idea that he was mostly retired, and instead managed the place. Yunho's is his last 'client', he doesn't entertain anyone else. hem. That's just my little dash of romance to the thing I guess. ^^; Still sad though, because Yunho is still paying him. Ah well.

I don't know where it's all gone! *cries* I hope it all comes back is all I can say! *lays out fic-bait* ^^;

[mimei]

yup, that did not escape my reading XD! tbh, i think i just read my own cynical version of events into it; viewing it strictly as JJ doing his job & Yunho being essentially unattached (i think my imagination ran away with me on this a little *rolls eyes at self*). i guess i don't find the reality of such a transaction very romantic~ but i'm hardly a romantic to start with *dies*

i hope so too D; it makes things harder to procrastinate without it!

[orionsroad]

That's what imaginations are for m'dear - I think it's best when you can apply it to something you read, so it becomes all the more real. ^_^

(hem. This is why I'm writing all this nonsense... procrastination bb!)

[wmelon_kaiye]

Cookies for you girl XDD
I'm glad someone is still writing =33 (squish)

Ah, I'm not the one for romance but this gave me the chills. Their relationship just felt so delicate, it really is just business after all...?

[orionsroad]

mmm, yummy. *nibbles* :D

I wants other people to write too!! ;_; I need some fic to sink my teeth into. Boo. *prods detox*

I don't know what the relationship is... I guess it's up to the reader how they take it. Could be that they're just comfortable in an old acquaintance, could be that they're on the edge of something more. Up to you m'dear! *squishes*

[ex_pottyfrodo]

oohhh.. I like how you built the atmosphere around this one. Made it really sexy without overdoing it with smut, really nice build up throughout.

[orionsroad]

Thanks! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. I don't think this could ever be smut... it's too ambiguous where they stand. But it's great you found it sexy at least! hehe