One for the Money [oneshot]

Oct 03, 2007 16:45

Title: One for the Money
Rating: PG13 ('for more mature themes' *gigglesnort*)
Form: Oneshot
Words: 1,402
Genre: ...drama? Maybe? What do you call this??
Summary: There's a pretty man waiting for him at the reception desk, ready to make his night whatever he wants it to be.
A/N: Nobody's posting on detox. *pouts* I dunnos if it's because it's exam ( Read more... )

sex kitten!jae, beauty!jae, yunjae/jaeho

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ara_niey October 4 2007, 13:26:07 UTC
ahh~everything in this brings out sexy and suave mood out of it..
until next time it is~♥

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ara_niey October 4 2007, 13:51:17 UTC
ahh~everything in this brings out sexy and suave mood out of it..
until next time it is~♥

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orionsroad October 9 2007, 13:38:10 UTC
Aw, thanks! I was trying to make it seem sort of suave or something, so it's good to hear I somewhat succeeded! ^_^

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ashura_unnie October 4 2007, 17:20:56 UTC
Wow that was smexy yet a bit desperate...

I mean it's like a love that can't be completed because of money and yet there is something between them...

A great read ^^

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orionsroad October 9 2007, 13:37:32 UTC
Yeah, I think the relationship between these two is beyond complicated. Poor things. D:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!!

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sexineko October 8 2007, 06:52:14 UTC
i looooooove this story. I read it a couple of days ago and since then i couldnt stop thinking of it. I actually printed out your story and read it on my bus ride up to binghamton which is three hours from where i am. =]

Whispers of the dark haired beauty start up; the unusual sight of him on the floor, accompanied, firing up their imaginations. More then one person eyes Yunho with envy as he leads his companion away.

only Yunho can make JJ come out and play XD

i wi

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sexineko October 8 2007, 06:54:05 UTC
i accidently pushed enter >.>
i wish there was more to the story but all good things come to an end ne? awesome job and veryyy smexy XD

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orionsroad October 9 2007, 13:36:51 UTC
Wow, you actually printed it out?! *feels very special* :D So happy you liked it that much!!

Thanks for the lovely comment!

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sexineko October 10 2007, 02:20:45 UTC
lol, yesss I printed it, I read it twice actually on the way back and going there. its very.. realistic. I could imagine it happening, that made it just that much better.

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chaosmyth October 8 2007, 12:24:34 UTC
OH GOD TOO HOT FOR WORDS. *O*

*flails*

The atmosphere you managed to create in this fic is just...amazing. *O* The smoldering sensuality, the underlying sexual tension, the fact that everything is so damn sexy even if there's not a single smut scene...God. *O* (I have a thing for this kind of setting and atmosphere, if you were wondering.)
And Jae as a host killed me for good. *___* It's bittersweet, the fact that Yunho pays him, but I like to think that he just needs an excuse. ^.- And he did go there only for Jae, after all. :D

♥♥♥♥♥

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orionsroad October 9 2007, 13:35:54 UTC
I'm glad you found it sexy and not too... er, tragic or anything. I think these two definately have some UST. XD I'd probably like to think that it's all an excuse too, and that they just want to spend time together, but well, I hope Yunho then gets some gonads and pushes it further. *shakes the Jaeho*

Jae would be a good host I think, if he could keep his mind on the job and not wander off into bubbly Jae!land in his head! heh.

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