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All the People We Used to Know, Part 5/12

Jan 18, 2008 08:40

Title: All the People We Used to Know (5/12)
Sequel to: The Price of a Memory
Pairings: Peter/Claude
Rating: R
Warnings: slash, AU, loosely holiday-related, starts out on the fluffy side but doesn’t stay that way, liberties taken with the Season Two timeline of events, possible inconsistency with canon materials not aired on television
Spoilers: AU ( Read more... )

all the people we used to know, fan fiction, heroes

Comments 26

phlogistics January 18 2008, 23:01:45 UTC

I'm sorry, I haven't told you this in a week... you're BRILLIANT!!!! Oh, the happy-happy joy-joy I have with this new update. I love your Claude so much- he's just perfect! I could always hear your characters' lines in my head (ignoring how insane that makes me sound).

Please, love yourself. Be a narcissist- you deserve it!

(And I hope my eternal devotion will give you the happiness of INspiRAtion!)

origamifrog23 January 22 2008, 19:52:36 UTC

Haha, I'm glad you continue to feel I'm worthy of this eternal devotion of yours as the story continues on. :) That is, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the new chapter. What you said about being able to hear the characters' lines in your head really does mean a lot to me.

Thanks so much for commenting! Part Six should be up by the end of the week. Hope to see you there!

evildevilangel January 19 2008, 01:00:03 UTC

This story = love.

origamifrog23 January 22 2008, 19:53:02 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad you think so. :) Part Six should be up by the end of the week. Hope to see you there!

takethesky87 January 19 2008, 05:14:17 UTC

I really loved this section. A lot of great humor as well as a surprising and amazing conversation between Claude and Nathan. I really like the relationship you've set up between them -- Nathan and Claude can both speak to Peter's character and quirks since they both know him so well. Let's see, some favorite lines/moments:

Nathan’s fork froze halfway to his mouth. Peter kicked his brother under the table and Claude couldn’t help but wonder what stray thought had earned Nathan that.
LOL, I love this for some reason.

“Looks like it,” Claude said. “I’ll do what I can to survive this precious family reunion. You…do whatever it is you do when others aren’t around. Dust the furniture in pearls and high heels or whatever.”

“I’m just…You know? Never mind. I’ll call you if anything comes up.”
AAHAHAHA. Matt's reaction is priceless.

“I don’t know Parkman, but I wouldn’t exactly call Suresh ‘resolutely heterosexual,’” Nathan commented. “When I first agreed to let Peter live with him, I thought it was only a matter of time before those two ( ... )

origamifrog23 January 22 2008, 19:57:13 UTC

Wow, thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the new chapter, especially the conversation between Nathan and Claude (which took a far more understanding tone than I was expecting when I originally wrote it, I have to say) and all those lines you cited above!

It's interesting you mentioned Nathan's line about Peter defending him even if he had his hand on the button to start World War III. That was actually a last minute change...originally, that whole line belonged to Claude and Nathan just kind of grunted in response. I wasn't sure how it would come off, giving that bit of dialogue to Nathan instead, so I'm pleased that you think it was a successful change. :)

Thanks so much for your great comments! Part Six should be up by the end of the week--hope to see you there!

meli_64 January 19 2008, 09:28:51 UTC

Oh this bit was as brilliant if not more so than the last. Loved Nathan-Claude interaction. So many amazingly Nathan lines. They perfectly Nathan. Your Nathan voice is amazing. And then the Claude one liners and Peter...Oh man I loved this chapter. :D

origamifrog23 January 22 2008, 20:02:05 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! I'm especially pleased to know how much you enjoyed Nathan's participation in this chapter. He's such a wonderfully complicated character on the show, which can make him a bit difficult to write in stuff like this. I'm really glad you feel the dialogue here was right for him. :)

Again, thanks for your great comments. Part Six should be up by the end of the week. Hope to see you there and that you continue to enjoy!

aunt_zelda January 19 2008, 19:21:53 UTC

Phew! Glad I’m not obscenely late! There’s this huge drabble contest over on Mylar_fic and it’s sucking my life ( ... )

origamifrog23 January 22 2008, 20:19:38 UTC

Yay for more Kensei approval! Especially in light of the fact that I was competing with the drabble contest over at the Mylar community for your attention this week. :) I really should go over there one of these days and check out the Mohinder/Sylar stories. The pairing has always intrigued me but for some reason I've never gotten around to reading any of the stuff based on it. Hmm ( ... )

aunt_zelda January 22 2008, 22:00:26 UTC

Yay for more Kensei approval! Especially in light of the fact that I was competing with the drabble contest over at the Mylar community for your attention this week ( ... )