campfire song song [oneshot]

Jul 22, 2011 15:41

campfire song song
jinki x jonghyun , romance / humor , pg , 2150w
it's another one of jonghyun's crazy ideas.

a/n: so finally...the first replay4japan fic.  for intoxicatedbrat . i apologize, over and over, for being so slow with this.  i've spent months and months toiling over these stories, honestly.  near completion, i would start all over again because i ( Read more... )

pairing: jonghyun/onew, !fanfic, -shinee, @oneshot, rating: pg

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jeogi July 22 2011, 19:53:56 UTC
intoxicatedbrat July 23 2011, 14:51:18 UTC
omg omg i sincerely thought you've forgotten ;__;

and gaahh omg what's this, this is like, band!fic + jongyu at the side. hdu! i want pure jongyu! but nah this is just too sugary sweet and fluffy and i love me some ot5. ;___;

and you never ever go wrong with their dynamics. that's why i love your fics. the jongyu, the minho and taemin lol and the kibum. perfect. :')

thank you for this. i pretty much enjoyed it. puts a smile on my face. :'))

and what's this about the high school au you've written?? you can't just mention it and then not post it! you can't!! T___T

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jeogi July 24 2011, 04:04:18 UTC
oh goodness, no, not a day went by that i didn't sit down for a good minute or so and think, "i seriously, seriously need to write those fics...but i just can't write"

ah i'm so sorry, honestly :( i figured you'd want that, but for some reason (and i guess this was just a really, really bad slump) i had included more ot5 than anything...i'm so sorry ㅠㅠ but i'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

thank you for helping, really. it means so much to me :') i hope you liked it ♡

and ah the high school au! i need to fix it up, but when i'm done (which hopefully won't take another half of a year to finish because i know what to write this time LMAO) i will definitely, definitely post it for you!!

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volatileflame July 22 2011, 21:45:21 UTC
this was cute : )

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jeogi July 24 2011, 04:06:40 UTC
thank you! ♡

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itachibana13 July 23 2011, 05:34:44 UTC
aw, i really liked this! it was sweet and very fun to read.

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jeogi July 24 2011, 04:07:02 UTC
haha i'm glad to hear it~ thank you very much!

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potaoto July 23 2011, 05:55:44 UTC
ahh this is so adorable :3 I love how you wrote the relationship between Jonghyun and Onew: teasing, flirty, kind of shy, and really sweet ♥ (look at me being a sap bahaha). I also love the way you wrote SHINee's dynamics in general; I can totally see them acting like this, those losers haha ♥

favorite lines, just because okay
a pair of cute pink elephant boxers, with a trunk for. well.
i am dead

taemin just thinks that these s'mores are so fucking good. so accurate ide. that boy loves food hahaha

he's tried bobbing for ducks with the magnetic fishing poles, but that's about it.
lmao such a qt mental image ;A;
but uh, he's fished with Park Sumin before and apparently he's pretty good! xD yeah okay I am kind of anal about these things, you can ignore this if you want haha ):

but when jinki opens his eyes, it's just jonghyun, his round eyes that are as deep as the night sky. just jonghyun smiling and staring at him and being jonghyun ( ... )

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jeogi July 24 2011, 04:13:20 UTC
oh my
gosh

WHERE

HAVE

YOU BEEN
? ? ?

you literally vanished off the face of the earth, i don't...even ㅠㅠ oh my ㅠㅠ how have you been?? i don't even know what to say except i'm glad you're back!! goodness, the last time we talked was before you went to the philippines, right? goodness goodness, goodness!

but anyway i guess i should reply to your comment now...but the fact that you're back and still reading my crappy fic...omg ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

thank you very very much, haha~ i'm glad you didn't find it awk since i haven't written fic in so long, but.
lol the elephant boxers ㅜ__ㅜ taken from infinite's sesame player (the member dongwoo has a pair of his own...i can't)
ahh no, thank you for telling me that! goodness, i honestly completely forgot about that! haha, of course our jinki is amazing at everything~ ah no no thank you for telling me! ㅎㅎ

no you are amazing and also present and alive ㅠ____ㅠ yeah
but thank you ♡♡♡

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potaoto July 24 2011, 06:06:21 UTC
cries our trip was extended to April and I deleted my account to focus on other things and then I forgot about it and yeah ;;;;; I have been good, haha, not dead and still really lazy orz

waylt your writing is not crappy!!! ): ):

lmao why does he own those boxers omg I feel the need to watch their show now bahaha

ahhhh you are so qt ;A; no no, thank you for writing this (it is good okay! your writing is as awesome as i remember it to be :3!!)

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frenchtoast July 23 2011, 08:00:05 UTC
aww this is so sweet. gives off a nice warm feeling by the time you get to the end :)

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jeogi July 24 2011, 04:07:24 UTC
haha, thank you very much! i'm glad, i'm glad. thank you for reading ♡

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