Caustic - Fic

[onur6boss]

Comments

[desera]

Excellent writing style, truly superbe!
First time I've read anything of yours (quite obviously lol) and I have to say your captured Gibbs' character brilliantly!
Would love to read the 'morning after' of this story but I'm truly dying to read your 'Firefightrt Tony' story so I'm hoping you won't digress from that :P

[onur6boss]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. There may or may-not be a sequel, I kind of like it where it ended, and I have to continnue with 'where there's smoke', so you dont lynch me LOL. So we'll see what happens :0D

[ferneberga]

Sniff! Bittersweet!!

[onur6boss]

*hands you tissue*
Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it! Posting first fanfic is nerve-wracking so I'm really thankful for the response.

[ferneberga]

*takes tissue*
I think you passed with flying colours, so look forward to seeing more stories from you in the future as and when the muse permits

[lin71]

Very well written! I love how you managed to capture them both just right and the sad ending (with the tiny sliver of hope that things will be talked out properly the next day) was wonderful!

[onur6boss]

Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm glad you liked it, and thought I captured the boys well. The characterizations are something I struggle with at times so I'm glad it worked out alright on this one.

[gibbsgirlabby]

We need a sequel where you fix them! Lovely story.

[onur6boss]

Not sure if there will be a sequel I kind of liked it ending a little ambiguously. However I didn't even expect to write this one so *shruggs* who knows there may be one if my muse holds me hostage again :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thank you for the feedback.

[singer_s_lament]

Well done. I agree with the tribe, we need the morning after sequel to fix them.

[onur6boss]

Thank you! Glad you liked it. I'll see what my muse produces for you!