Awww poor boys *hugs them* Love how Tony was so drunk he thought he was at his apartment and actually he was at Gibbs . . . even mad and drunk he found his way 'home'
The boys need lots of hugs. Yep even drunk off his ass, Tony knows where home is, even if it was unconsciously done! Home is where the heart it, and Tony's heart belongs with Jethro!
All these sequel requests I may have to make my muse come up with something! I'll bribe it with chocolate.... And yummy Tibbs make up sessions....Hmmmmm!
Here *hands over double chocolate chip cookies* but don't go through them all. Half for this sequel and half for your firefighter Tony muse because I really want to read that *g*
I really liked it! I like how you created such an emotional moment, and really let us feel how Tony and Gibbs felt at this time without ever going too much into the specifics-it was just a really great little scene with a lot of impact. I loved it. And I loved Gibbs taking good care of Tony like this-and Tony thinking Gibbs' house was his apartment was just....<3. loved it. :)
Thank you! I was looking to create that emotional pull, and being my first fanfiction I was a little weary about putting too much information into it and becoming lost and jumbled in my own thoughts. So I kept things simple! Glad that worked.
I see both Tony and Gibbs as strong, passionate people. And that passion helps to make their relationship spark, however with that passion comes the ability to hurt eachother deeply.
Even drunk Tony knows where his heart belongs, even if it was unconsciously done. I have read your fic's and loved them, so to have you comment and say you liked this is an honor. Thank you!
but you're right-they're super passionate, and you do well at conveying that! I know what you mean about too much info-I get that way, too. Sometimes I just make some notes if it gets to be too much, but mostly I just go by the seat of my pants and get overwhelmed, LOLOL
The actual first draft of this story (which no one will ever see- ever) was so jumbled full of ideas, I got completely lost. When it was finished I went back and read it and was like WTF, what the he'll is this! It made no sense at all LOL, so I scrapped it and came up with this instead! I have a massive ammount of respect for anyone who writes multi-chapter fic's and case fic's, (love your Not that Simple) must be so very difficult to keep your head straight.
I couldn't have done it without you! All my fics would never have been written or posted without your help so thank you. Yep there is more to come, you know it... And with calls for a sequel to this there may be even more. I swear between the fic's, work and house building, I'm going to be busy!
This was very well done, you captured the voices and feelings so well, I could just see Tony walking out at this. Thank goodness his subconscious guided him home, Gibbs definitely learned a lesson here, they have a lot to sort out though!
I think it would take a lot to have Tony walk out, but having him walk at this felt right. I'm glad you thought the voices worked well, it is something I struggle with.
Tony knows where he belongs, that's with Jethro, although nothing is really easy with these two they do have a lot to sort out as you said. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thank you for your feedback.
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Definitely needs a 'morning after' sequel *g*
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All these sequel requests I may have to make my muse come up with something! I'll bribe it with chocolate.... And yummy Tibbs make up sessions....Hmmmmm!
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I see both Tony and Gibbs as strong, passionate people. And that passion helps to make their relationship spark, however with that passion comes the ability to hurt eachother deeply.
Even drunk Tony knows where his heart belongs, even if it was unconsciously done.
I have read your fic's and loved them, so to have you comment and say you liked this is an honor. Thank you!
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FLATTERY! :D :D
*blushes again*
but you're right-they're super passionate, and you do well at conveying that! I know what you mean about too much info-I get that way, too. Sometimes I just make some notes if it gets to be too much, but mostly I just go by the seat of my pants and get overwhelmed, LOLOL
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The actual first draft of this story (which no one will ever see- ever) was so jumbled full of ideas, I got completely lost. When it was finished I went back and read it and was like WTF, what the he'll is this! It made no sense at all LOL, so I scrapped it and came up with this instead!
I have a massive ammount of respect for anyone who writes multi-chapter fic's and case fic's, (love your Not that Simple) must be so very difficult to keep your head straight.
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Yep there is more to come, you know it... And with calls for a sequel to this there may be even more. I swear between the fic's, work and house building, I'm going to be busy!
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Tony knows where he belongs, that's with Jethro, although nothing is really easy with these two they do have a lot to sort out as you said.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thank you for your feedback.
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