I really liked it! I like how you created such an emotional moment, and really let us feel how Tony and Gibbs felt at this time without ever going too much into the specifics-it was just a really great little scene with a lot of impact. I loved it. And I loved Gibbs taking good care of Tony like this-and Tony thinking Gibbs' house was his apartment was just....<3. loved it. :)
Thank you! I was looking to create that emotional pull, and being my first fanfiction I was a little weary about putting too much information into it and becoming lost and jumbled in my own thoughts. So I kept things simple! Glad that worked.
I see both Tony and Gibbs as strong, passionate people. And that passion helps to make their relationship spark, however with that passion comes the ability to hurt eachother deeply.
Even drunk Tony knows where his heart belongs, even if it was unconsciously done. I have read your fic's and loved them, so to have you comment and say you liked this is an honor. Thank you!
but you're right-they're super passionate, and you do well at conveying that! I know what you mean about too much info-I get that way, too. Sometimes I just make some notes if it gets to be too much, but mostly I just go by the seat of my pants and get overwhelmed, LOLOL
The actual first draft of this story (which no one will ever see- ever) was so jumbled full of ideas, I got completely lost. When it was finished I went back and read it and was like WTF, what the he'll is this! It made no sense at all LOL, so I scrapped it and came up with this instead! I have a massive ammount of respect for anyone who writes multi-chapter fic's and case fic's, (love your Not that Simple) must be so very difficult to keep your head straight.
Ah, yeah, first drafts suck! It IS really hard to keep things straight when you're writing a long fic-but I played Not That Simple over and over again in my brain before I wrote it, LOL.
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I see both Tony and Gibbs as strong, passionate people. And that passion helps to make their relationship spark, however with that passion comes the ability to hurt eachother deeply.
Even drunk Tony knows where his heart belongs, even if it was unconsciously done.
I have read your fic's and loved them, so to have you comment and say you liked this is an honor. Thank you!
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FLATTERY! :D :D
*blushes again*
but you're right-they're super passionate, and you do well at conveying that! I know what you mean about too much info-I get that way, too. Sometimes I just make some notes if it gets to be too much, but mostly I just go by the seat of my pants and get overwhelmed, LOLOL
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The actual first draft of this story (which no one will ever see- ever) was so jumbled full of ideas, I got completely lost. When it was finished I went back and read it and was like WTF, what the he'll is this! It made no sense at all LOL, so I scrapped it and came up with this instead!
I have a massive ammount of respect for anyone who writes multi-chapter fic's and case fic's, (love your Not that Simple) must be so very difficult to keep your head straight.
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