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Tsubasa Reservoir Fic: Lost In Translation: Lesson IV (Interactions)

Jul 26, 2006 21:28

Well... better late than never, eh? ^^;; I'll continue to update but I can't make promises as to how long it will take. But thanks for reading!

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fengtianshi July 27 2006, 23:37:47 UTC

Jealous Kuro-pon made me squee!
Love his fic , hope to see new chapters soon!^^

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:38:29 UTC

He's adorable when he's jealous. :) Thanks!

alaceron July 28 2006, 13:48:34 UTC

Ooh. I'd been looking forward to the next installment of this.
And I enjoyed it very much. ^-^
Thankyou.

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:39:04 UTC

Sorry you had to wait so long! ^^;; Thanks for the comments.

erenriel July 28 2006, 16:32:31 UTC

It was still funny, just in a different way. They thought Fai was a woman, which is hilarious. And jealous Kuro-myuu rocks my socks! XD

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:39:54 UTC

Hehe, glad to hear that. And Fai doesn't care if people think he's a woman (it amuses him, and this certainly wouldn't be the first time it's happened.)

horatia July 29 2006, 01:48:55 UTC

I like this series, and an update totally made my day!

But I do have to say that I think you misused a few "thou"s in there. Things like and "same clan as thou" should both be "thee". I donno the proper linguistic reasoning, I guess just a whole bunch of Shakespeare reasoning makes you develop an ear for it. :) Okay, time to stuff the inner-dork back down. It's gone.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:41:11 UTC

Glad to hear it made you happy! :)

I probably did - I thought about spending the internet time to research it properly, then I decided that Hakata doesn't know the proper usage either. He's just trying to freak Kurogane and Fai out a little (it didn't work.)

wetheril July 30 2006, 14:55:01 UTC

I'm no expert at this, but if I remember correctly, you use "thou" as the subject, and "thee" as the object. In our modern English, it's simply "you" for both the subject and the object, so it's never been something to worry about. It's like "I" for subject and "me" for object. ^^

ontogenesis September 2 2006, 16:12:33 UTC

Yeah, I probably should go back and fix it. ^^;;

raven_goth July 31 2006, 03:23:46 UTC

yay!! ah, i've waited for a new chapter for so long *ish happy now*

oh god, i almosted died when they thought fye was a girl XD good stuff

ontogenesis September 2 2006, 16:14:01 UTC

Glad you're happy! :)

Hehe, Kurogane was surprised too, although not amused like you.