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Tsubasa Reservoir Fic: Lost In Translation: Lesson IV (Interactions)

Jul 26, 2006 21:28

Well... better late than never, eh? ^^;; I'll continue to update but I can't make promises as to how long it will take. But thanks for reading!

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Neat! jaina_torsec July 27 2006, 03:07:17 UTC

This was really cool :D
I can't wait to read more! I especially liked Fye's dangerous look when the leader grabs his chin B)
Thanks for that fic ;)

Re: Neat! ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:32:06 UTC

Hehe, Fai got a little pissed, didn't he? ^^ Thanks for the comment.

duchessa July 27 2006, 06:04:35 UTC

You really made my day - after the lack of Kurogane & Fai in the last Tsubasa chapter I was craving for a good story of the two ( ... )

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:34:10 UTC

^^ Wai, glad to know you found it funny. And Fai's pretty enough *and* he often holds himself like a woman too (his posture and mannerisms.)

Oh, Fai will flirt. Mostly as a way to make Kurogane jealous, I think.

I hadn't thought about musicians. Maybe?

I read the scans but I didn't get to download Pikari's translations yet, so I need to do that. I'll post comments next time I get to an internet cafe.

pmastamonkmonk July 27 2006, 06:49:43 UTC

the scouts could easily just ride off to different camps with them and sell Fai into slavery or to the circus or something. That would be rather difficult to explain to the brat and the princess.

Not because he cares or anything of the sort... he just doesn't wanna get in trouble.

X3

That made me smile. I'd sell Fai to the circus... make a pretty penny, too. >:D

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:35:06 UTC

Yeah, Kuro just doesn't want to see the princess cry. XD Thanks for the remarks!

wetheril July 27 2006, 07:58:14 UTC

I think it's a well-written chapter, and certainly, I agree with you that Fay is no maiden in distress, but yes, it's always fun to see Kurogane getting worked up over stuff. He's cute when he's jealous, even if he's in denial. XD

ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:36:28 UTC

Thanks for the reassurance. It's been such a long time since the last chapter - it's easy to get out of the "flow" of writing a particular story so I did worry.

Kuro will have plenty of opportunity for both jealousy and denial in the upcoming chapters.

azalee_calypso July 27 2006, 10:34:29 UTC

Aah, very cute ^_^ Loved Fai's "I've-killed-better-men-than-you" look, and the soldiers mistaking him for a woman. And Kurogane's point of view is funny enough, (loved when he didn't want to take the risk of finding out if the Yasha clan kiss hands XD).
But, I think Shurano is the Ashura clan's country, and the Yasha clan's is Yamano. I think, I'm kind of confused with all the theories about that. I can't remember when the "Yamano" name was said in the manga, but I remember Ashura saying he doesn't know where the Yasha clan comes from... maybe Fai ou Kurochi said it later...
Anyway. Lovely, and I can't wait to see how Fai acts in the camp. This is going to be fun. 8D

Hmm... ontogenesis July 30 2006, 14:38:06 UTC

You may be right. I thought the whole world was named Shurano - but I do recall the name "Yamano" as well. Maybe I need to post a question on kuroxfai.

I hope it will be lots of fun. Fai's such a rascal. Thanks for the comments!