Tsubasa Reservoir Fic: Lost In Translation: Lesson IV (Interactions)

[ontogenesis]

Well... better late than never, eh? ^^;; I'll continue to update but I can't make promises as to how long it will take. But thanks for reading!

Comments

[duchessa]

You really made my day - after the lack of Kurogane & Fai in the last Tsubasa chapter I was craving for a good story of the two.
Love the chapter - you shouldn't worry about the supposed lack of funny, reading your Kurogane's POV is plenty amusing (he does get annoyed a LOT - its a wonder he hasn't burst any blood vessels yet XD). And Fai got mistaken for a woman! Ahahaha, he's certainly is pretty enough.

'FYI: This isn't going to be a “Fai sleeps with everyone in camp” or “Fai is a maiden in distress whom Kurogane must rescue!” story.'
I agree, Fai doesn't strike me as either type, and he certainly is *capable* (hates weepy!Fai with a passion) of taking care of himself -he just usually don't bothers. Fai's definitely a flirt though. Harmless flirting is okay right? Kurogane can show more *ahem* concern...

'Warrior/farmer: in a clan constantly at war with another, I figure that there probably two main professions: warrior and farmer.'
Are there musicians? There seems to be in the Ashura clan.

Have you read the latest Tsubasa chapters? I enjoy reading your commentaries as much as your fanfics - and god,chap 122 show Fai self-sacrificing habits to be more extreme than I ever imagined.

Thank you for the update!

[ontogenesis]

^^ Wai, glad to know you found it funny. And Fai's pretty enough *and* he often holds himself like a woman too (his posture and mannerisms.)

Oh, Fai will flirt. Mostly as a way to make Kurogane jealous, I think.

I hadn't thought about musicians. Maybe?

I read the scans but I didn't get to download Pikari's translations yet, so I need to do that. I'll post comments next time I get to an internet cafe.