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ontogenesis

Tsubasa Reservoir Fic: Lost In Translation: Lesson IV (Interactions)

Jul 26, 2006 21:28

Well... better late than never, eh? ^^;; I'll continue to update but I can't make promises as to how long it will take. But thanks for reading!

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ontogenesis September 2 2006, 16:17:21 UTC

Wai, I'm glad you read through all of it and enjoyed yourself! :) And it's nice to hear that Gion worked well as a character for you - he'll be an unwitting source of jealousy for Kuro-pon, methinks.

snowaltz September 30 2006, 17:33:49 UTC

Trust me, this chapter is funny. That exchange between Gion and Kurogane is hilarious. Fai is Kurogane's woman and they elope to live happily ever after! *squee*

with the "thou" etc iambickilometer May 12 2007, 18:17:58 UTC

Two things regarding your choice of language - "Thou" forms are the single familiar pronoun. If the leader was being formal, he would use "you" and normal verb conjugations. "Hast" etc is for the familiar "thou." Also, even if he did use the "thou" form, if he spoke to both Kurogane and Fai he would use "you" because it is plural.

Disregarding that, I'm really enjoying this story. It is delightfully awkward and funny.

Re: with the "thou" etc ontogenesis May 13 2007, 02:19:43 UTC

Heh, thanks for the info! I'm not going to change it, though, because I wanted the speech to sound strange to us (modern readers.) "You" and normal verb conjugations wouldn't sound strange.

Re: with the "thou" etc iambickilometer May 13 2007, 02:42:30 UTC

I figured as much, but the inner language geek within me was crying out for justice. :D

insanefriends October 14 2007, 18:43:52 UTC

Aiiee!! I LOVE this series of stories you've written. somuch.

The characters are very well done.

I found this story through the manifesto for the KuroFai pairing, so I was wondering if you've updated any further than this??? (because I LOVE THIS and need more lol plzkthnx)

Thank you for sharing!

konnichipuu June 22 2010, 16:22:30 UTC

"With his luck, these men were probably engaged in an eternal blood feud with the Tribe of Blond Frilly Coat-Wearing Men."
I.. can't... breath... *laughing too hard*

"Tomoyo-hime adamantly refused to let him use body parts even though that would have been more effective."
I love Kuro-pon >.<

"'Fai. Is. Not. My. Woman. He. Is. A. Man. A Very Annoying Insane Man.' The flush on Gion's face deepened and he rubbed the back of his neck in embarrassment. 'Ohh, that's okay. Our clan doesn't have any rules against that sort of thing - is that why you two left? You were forced to elope and run away?'"
Oh my gosh... *falling off my chair laughing*

It wasn't as funny as the last one? It was pretty much fun to me... And I appreciate the darker and more searious parts as well - they're very well done as they come out very clearly and sharp. I love this story so much!