they shine for you (second star to the right)

Jun 25, 2010 22:20

title they shine for you (second star to the right)
rating pg
pairing fernando torres/sergio ramos
warnings au. crack. all signs point to my insanity.
summary in which fernando is a space alien and sergio falls in love with him.
note THIS IS ALL NEDA'S FAULT. she said that if i wrote fic about the boys being aliens, she'd read it. well, here ( Read more... )

fernando torres, jesus navas, sergio ramos, au

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adorerdollylux June 25 2010, 03:55:22 UTC
okay maybe i'm like. severely unbalanced and probably way too emotional right now but ohmygod this made me cry so much!

nando broke my heart. his innocence, his vulnerability, his guilt and his embarrassment just. ohmygod. i ache and it made me so teary and it made me want to just hide him but god sergio was perfect with him. he took such good care of him and made him feel safe and warm and gave him comfort and love and oh.

i know this was probably supposed to be light and i truly don't know how i make everything so ~serious~ in my head but.

oh oh nando. i ache. this was so sweet, hana.

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distira June 25 2010, 03:59:49 UTC
okay no you got it. like. exactly. i mean, of course the inital idea was cracktastic but then i started writing and nando just happened and he was like a newborn colt in my head and he needed such taking care of and sergio was just there at the right time and the right place and everything fell in. so, it started light? but in my head it was more than that. and of course it's up for interpretation, whatever, but you just get it so perfectly.

<3

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adorerdollylux June 25 2010, 04:05:21 UTC
i'm off to write them right now. you've inspired me and you've weighted nando perfectly in my heart. thank you so much.

and i truly, truly loved this. i will never forget when i first read your work, i know i've told you that before, but it's true. i will never forget how i felt when i first read your sergio and nando, and you have defined them for me. just thank you. <3

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distira June 25 2010, 04:11:32 UTC
oh yay! i am completely honest when i say i love reading your writing the best. every time i see you update born to run or do a new standalone i just. smile.

<3

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influira June 25 2010, 03:59:39 UTC
HHAHAHAHAHA oh my god i love this

also thanks for making me look like i have an alien fetish....

but HAHASHDFLKAHFKKLAHHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIS HAHAHAHAHAHAAH OH GOD

i love when you write

ahahahahhaha i love them so much

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distira June 25 2010, 04:02:45 UTC
um hey there was no alien porn so idk where you're getting fetish, girl.........

but hey, yeah, this was fun :]

<333333

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parvardigar June 25 2010, 04:02:06 UTC
omg hahahaha okay so i don't eevn read sernadno but neda made me read this HAHAHAh lmfao okay omg this was so fucking cute like hahahaha wtf it's ridic but hilarious and adorable ahahha omg hahahaaha i'm loling.

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distira June 25 2010, 04:03:30 UTC
well it's all neda's fault that i wrote this so jajajaja yeah so i'm glad you like it! :]

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lunar_art June 25 2010, 04:18:34 UTC
I'm trying to scan my flist but this I will come back to and give it the proper attention.

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distira June 25 2010, 04:20:35 UTC
:]

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lunar_art June 25 2010, 07:04:27 UTC
I am not usually one for AUs but that was cute as hell.
just a huge grin plastered on my face.

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distira June 25 2010, 14:40:25 UTC
:] yay! i mean, i have a love/hate relationship with au's- i write them but they drive me crazy. this one just had to be written. i'm glad you like it!

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totally_loca June 25 2010, 07:33:26 UTC
This is gorgeous. All soft and mellow and it made me ache in a good way. Fernando's so skittish and Sergio just proves that he knows people, even when they're not human. Shiny :)

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distira June 25 2010, 14:40:43 UTC
:] i'm so glad you like it!

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