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Crashing Paradise.

Feb 13, 2005 11:27

Title: Crashing Paradise
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh
Pairing: Yami no Malik/Yami no Bakura
Word Count: 6,047
Summary: At the end of the YGO series, YnBakura is locked away in the Shadow Realm forever. Unfortunately, YnMalik isn't too pleased at the unexpected company, so the two of them decide to gatecrash Paradise so that they can get their revenge on the ( Read more... )

yuugiou: yami no malik/yami no bakura, yuugiou: yami no bakura, yuugiou: yami no yuugi, genre: humor, fandom: yuugiou, yuugiou: yami no malik, type: slash

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a_white_rain February 13 2005, 23:19:31 UTC

I liked the gatway/many different relgion ones. Made me smile.

fickle_goddess February 13 2005, 23:25:48 UTC

I didn't know enough about Egyptian mythology and didn't want to offend people by making it seem like the Egyptian mytholgy was the only right one, so I just decided to have them all rotate.

...see, that's the kind of reasoning that makes sense to me at 4AM. ^^;

a_white_rain February 13 2005, 23:33:34 UTC

that does make sense, and WAS funny. It was satire against orginzed relgions!

fickle_goddess February 13 2005, 23:36:44 UTC

*grins* Satire against pretty much everything really. Including my OTP and Atemu's ability to get rid of people.

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evilcourtney February 14 2005, 08:55:26 UTC

Heh. ^^ I hope I get to somewhere like this when I'm dead. It sounds amusing.

fickle_goddess February 14 2005, 14:55:31 UTC

If it has pretty bishie boys having sex in front of you? Hell yeah, I'm up to it. *smirks*

I said I would homgsekrit February 15 2005, 01:54:16 UTC

Now...if only we can get Neko to do a well-rounded critique.... x___X Meh. I suck with those.

To top it off, I don't know what you were talking about earlier--I found it quite hilarious, quite frankly. It made me laugh, and considering I needed to laugh, that was great. Usually when I need to laugh, it's hard to get me to. Don't know why ( ... )

*hugs* fickle_goddess February 15 2005, 04:49:27 UTC

Critique at all is good.

As for IC, I tend to use different interpretations of them depending on what genre I'm writing. Luckily for me, they've both shown plenty of different sides so I can get away with making them more human in some fics and less in others. And yeah, it wouldn't be anywhere near as much if I had been explicit about what they'd been doing to shock Atemu like that.

Neko, I asked for con. crit. That means telling me when stuff seems off - like I said, I wasn't too happy with the middle of the fic myself so it's good to have someone suggest a possible reason for it. As for Atemu, I was originally going to have them push him into the river, then discuss the chances of everyone getting eating by spiritual crocodiles while trying to save him, but then I just couldn't figure out how to get the psychoshipping in there. And for some reason, the idea of Atemu playing matchmaker just to get them the hell out of Paradise (no pun intended) amused me by its irony ( ... )

anonymous February 16 2005, 18:22:42 UTC

This was a very long fic. Its funny how Atemu was suggesting Yami no Malik and Yami no Bakura become lovers. I also loved the part how Yami no Malik tried to vanish Yami no Bakura out of his realm to only see him return again. The religion thing was a bit confusing to me since I am not well rounded with mythology but, it was still good. The monsters eating pop corn was a good touch also. I always thought that Yami no Bakura would be the one who wanted privacy. What am I talking about? I loved this fic.lol ( ... )

fickle_goddess February 16 2005, 19:30:30 UTC

That was probably the longest fic that I've ever written, but it was a humor fic after all. Tjose tend to get longer than my usual ones.

YnMalik, I find more interesting than YnBakura, so that's why I focus more on me. Personally, my theory towards YnMalik is similar - he's basically a shadow from the Shadow Realm, and Malik's hatred gave him enough strength to come to life and possess Malik. So he'd be the darkness, not YnBakura, since he's the one that was born from a shadow.

Nice to hear from a fellow psychoshipping fan.

I love pyschoshipping anonymous March 12 2005, 04:03:47 UTC

Yeah Yami no Malik is real interesting and has a more mysterious side than Yami no Bakura. I love them both. I always believed Yami no Malik was a shadow to begin with. I wish there was some way to prove it though. I also believed that he was a tomb robber with Yami no Bakura in Eypt, but in hiding....

Yeah its nice to hear from you too. I took your advice and made it so anonymous people can reply now to my story. Though I finally made my decision to keep Yami no Malik as seme.

Do you know where I can find and read more pyschoshipping stories?

Y.BakuraY.Malik fan

xinda February 17 2005, 02:19:07 UTC

I am very very much amused. The monsters, the religions, Atem's words, the ranting... all very amusing. Something to put in memories, indeed.

Sorry for the short comment, I did really enjoy this.

fickle_goddess February 17 2005, 02:25:18 UTC

It's okay, I'm just glad you liked it. ^_^

xinda February 17 2005, 12:12:30 UTC

It's okay, I'm just glad you liked it. ^_^

I very much did. Honestly, regardless of organized religions, I wouldn't be surprised if it was something like that *shrugs*

I still laughed out loud during this... a lot. And went "awww" and just... I was much amused... I saw a lot of things that sounded familiar, but just... was so amusing... so very amusing.

fickle_goddess February 17 2005, 15:08:56 UTC

Familar? @_@ I know that I say the 'would it kill you to' a lot, but I didn't think that I yanked anything else directly from anywhere...

And yay for making you happy. It was mostly you and Neko that I was thinking of while I wrote this.

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