Crashing Paradise.

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Title: Crashing Paradise
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh
Pairing: Yami no Malik/Yami no Bakura
Word Count: 6,047
Summary: At the end of the YGO series, YnBakura is locked away in the Shadow Realm forever. Unfortunately, YnMalik isn't too pleased at the unexpected company, so the two of them decide to gatecrash Paradise so that they can get their revenge on the

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[fickle_goddess]

Critique at all is good.

As for IC, I tend to use different interpretations of them depending on what genre I'm writing. Luckily for me, they've both shown plenty of different sides so I can get away with making them more human in some fics and less in others. And yeah, it wouldn't be anywhere near as much if I had been explicit about what they'd been doing to shock Atemu like that.

Neko, I asked for con. crit. That means telling me when stuff seems off - like I said, I wasn't too happy with the middle of the fic myself so it's good to have someone suggest a possible reason for it. As for Atemu, I was originally going to have them push him into the river, then discuss the chances of everyone getting eating by spiritual crocodiles while trying to save him, but then I just couldn't figure out how to get the psychoshipping in there. And for some reason, the idea of Atemu playing matchmaker just to get them the hell out of Paradise (no pun intended) amused me by its irony.

*smirks* Oh come on, being a floorshow for monsters or shocking the daylights out of the Pharaoh and his court while ruining the whole point of Atemu's suggestion that they pair off? Not much of a choice really.

And thank you very much for such a detailed review and wonderful feedback.