okay I am not used to reading on my laptop so I wrote that comment while reading prepare for a comment in which I manage to rant over a oneshot that is "only" 3.4k long but you know, your words make me go woobediedoobedie.
First off, Sekai. I don't regret pulling you into my OhTP.
jongin and sehun will both be the arms supporting the heavy load life dumps on them, they'll be the tears at four o'clock when it's too dark to see where the ghost of depression is hiding. oh god you know how much I love the night and the feelings it evokes in people and how vulnerable it makes them and oh god.
yells will poison the walls where. i love you's, you mean a lot to me, i'm not gonna leave you are hanged.
"stay because you love me." then another petal. "leave because i'm a bastard." (and so on, I won't quote the whole fucking thing here
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and like always i like how you quote my /secretly/ favorite lines and i just---- i want to say i love you again but that's too much but- okay i love you.
it's not like i;m 100 % original whatsoever i actually just got the idea from murakami's 'on seeing the one hundred per cent perfect girl' and it was months or even a year ago and i really cried the first time i read it (it still makes me sad) but yeah and i just messed with the explanation and i hope this is okay enough for a first draft ._.
bbbut i like it like this and i love you like this and /koala hugs/
the third of koelien and which not-so-secret admirer are you i have like a thousand, lien~
Holy shit the two beginning stories made me die from all the beautiful writing and the cute and then the ending just came just like that. and murakami is one of my all time favorite authors and that was beautiful and i wish i could write like you!!
Oh gosh thank you so much and i'm glad you liked it! Though i wouldn't want you to lower your standards and write like me ;-; But thank you for reading! :)
I think this story just wormed it's way to the top of my favourites list- and I would be lying if I said it didn't squeeze into my heart too. Just a lovely, lovely writing style you have and the way the character's were portrayed is perfect <3 /cries, be still my sekai heart ;A;
this was too beautiful that I had to read it quite few times. First of all sekai and hunhan, as reasons that led me to this ff, then krishan, which is a pairing I kind of ship secretly, last but not the least important, how you've written this. I mean wow, that really impressed me. At first I was a bit confused, you were using future and I was like 'what', then i finally realized how the story was working. Well, good job because I loved it ;-; Jongin, Sehun and the roses' petals omg that was too romantic it made me cry, also there wouldn't have been any better way (at least to try) to convince Sehun to stay, totally captured by his effort ;; like "Jongin let me love you even more now" ooow T^T Kris and Luhan slowly falling in love was cute and very spontaneous, loved it!
/ugly sobbing at hunhan/ although I loved Sekai and Krishan, knowing that Hunhan happened and how did they fail to recognize each other fast enough was totally heartbreaking ;~;
aww, no. thank you for reading and i'm glad you like (and got) it. omg /sighs because i thought that it the jongin and roses part would come off as cheesy and i'm happy it didn't :) honestly i didn't knew how to make sehun stay so..
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/hides your posters and loves you and your smoke~
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First off, Sekai. I don't regret pulling you into my OhTP.
jongin and sehun will both be the arms supporting the heavy load life dumps on them, they'll be the tears at four o'clock when it's too dark to see where the ghost of depression is hiding.
oh god you know how much I love the night and the feelings it evokes in people and how vulnerable it makes them and oh god.
yells will poison the walls where. i love you's, you mean a lot to me, i'm not gonna leave you are hanged.
"stay because you love me." then another petal. "leave because i'm a bastard." (and so on, I won't quote the whole fucking thing here ( ... )
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and like always i like how you quote my /secretly/ favorite lines and i just---- i want to say i love you again but that's too much but- okay i love you.
it's not like i;m 100 % original whatsoever
i actually just got the idea from murakami's
'on seeing the one hundred per cent perfect girl' and it was months or even a year ago and i really cried the first time i read it (it still makes me sad) but yeah and i just messed with the explanation and i hope this is okay enough for a first draft ._.
bbbut i like it like this and i love you like this and /koala hugs/
the third of koelien and which not-so-secret admirer are you i have like a thousand,
lien~
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Though i wouldn't want you to lower your standards and write like me ;-;
But thank you for reading! :)
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and I would be lying if I said it didn't squeeze into my heart too.
Just a lovely, lovely writing style you have and the way the character's were portrayed is perfect <3
/cries,
be still my sekai heart ;A;
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thank you so much for reading and for your kind words and--
sekai is just perf ;-;
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First of all sekai and hunhan, as reasons that led me to this ff, then krishan, which is a pairing I kind of ship secretly, last but not the least important, how you've written this. I mean wow, that really impressed me. At first I was a bit confused, you were using future and I was like 'what', then i finally realized how the story was working. Well, good job because I loved it ;-;
Jongin, Sehun and the roses' petals omg that was too romantic it made me cry, also there wouldn't have been any better way (at least to try) to convince Sehun to stay, totally captured by his effort ;; like "Jongin let me love you even more now" ooow T^T
Kris and Luhan slowly falling in love was cute and very spontaneous, loved it!
/ugly sobbing at hunhan/ although I loved Sekai and Krishan, knowing that Hunhan happened and how did they fail to recognize each other fast enough was totally heartbreaking ;~;
Thank you for this \O\
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omg /sighs because i thought that it the jongin and roses part would come off as cheesy and i'm happy it didn't :) honestly i didn't knew how to make sehun stay so..
and no, thank you again for reading & commenting~
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