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uberchrome in onetaotrees

(sixty seconds is enough for this story)

Mar 18, 2013 03:44

angst, romance | oneshot | pg-13

( sehun walks to the east. luhan to the west. )

g: angst, r: pg-13, l: oneshot, g: romance, p: hunhan

Comments 31

pleaseuu March 19 2013, 06:24:22 UTC

wow jullien WOW I HATE YOU FOR THIS I HOPE YOU KNOW THIS

the two stories in the beginning were so sweet I was totally rooting for sekai and krishan all the way --- the chemistry of krishan was the best, imo. I was practically drowning in my own puddle of tears because THIS IS HOW YOU FLUFF. can you not.

and then the hunhan ending came and BANG you have just crashed my heart into the rock wall of feels. can I just exit this building of life now. PLEASEUU. ;; so now I'm like OT4??????? WHO DO I ROOT FOR?????22222?? wow jullien lemme give you a bone crushing hug for writing this

I would quote the shit out of this, but typing on the iPad is a pain in the pigu :c

I shall now crawl back into my hole bye

uberchrome March 19 2013, 18:16:53 UTC

what are you doing
get off here your majesty
and i'm sorry for breaking your hunhan feels but omg omg omg this is me TRYING to fluff sorry im not as pro as you are~

i like pigus let me kiss yours and thank you for reading and commenting senpai~

taffyn March 25 2013, 03:29:51 UTC

oMGG?! this is so beautifully written i haven't felt this touched in a long time.
the flow of this is so genius and your style is gorgeous.
wow i love this so much. i feel so incoherent rn lmao

uberchrome March 28 2013, 13:06:17 UTC

omg i'm glad it touched you somehow.
thanks for reading and commenting!~

traverse_this April 3 2013, 18:09:19 UTC

Oh my, I think you just broke my heart with this wonderful story. When Kai plucks the petals, and the ending, they just killed me okay. The way you write in this story is different (i mean the tenses and time shifts), which is refreshing. Is there any fic from you that's not good? like srsly.

uberchrome April 4 2013, 14:33:22 UTC

oh god you flatter me too much really i love you c;
thank you for reading ahjumma~

kolmeprincess April 5 2013, 07:57:49 UTC

i think im crying? omg
;;______________________;;

THANK YOU <3<3<3

uberchrome April 8 2013, 23:43:11 UTC

Omg ;A;
No, thank you for reading & commenting! :)

baekyeolks May 29 2013, 14:44:03 UTC

Well-written, and I like how you started the story in the future, and then switched between the present and the past. It's like, it's one of those stories that don't make a lot of sense at first because of the arrangement of the events but at the same time it strangely makes sense because of the little details here and there and then when you're not looking it suckerpunches you in the gut really really hard. -INHALES- And then it hits you that children are starving in Africa and you're suddenly questioning you life decisions and chocolate just doesn't cut it anymore and you realize that you're OTP may not be real. SOBBING. GROSS SOBBING. WHY AUTHOR-NIM?? HunHan is my mothership. ; A ;

Oh my god I am totally... OH my god I am still sobbing because I'm the kind of shipper that obstinately ships exo members with one person and only one and then sekai and krishan happened and i am experiencing a plethora of emotions right now.

nope, nope. i'm gone. i'm gooooooooooooone. goodbye sayonara adieu

btw i still luv ur fic. /sobs OTL

uberchrome May 30 2013, 01:39:00 UTC

eeeeeeck /hyperventilates because your comment made me so happy :)
omg i sorta kinda just giggled over the starving kid part i am sorry and thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)