okay I am not used to reading on my laptop so I wrote that comment while reading prepare for a comment in which I manage to rant over a oneshot that is "only" 3.4k long but you know, your words make me go woobediedoobedie.
First off, Sekai. I don't regret pulling you into my OhTP.
jongin and sehun will both be the arms supporting the heavy load life dumps on them, they'll be the tears at four o'clock when it's too dark to see where the ghost of depression is hiding. oh god you know how much I love the night and the feelings it evokes in people and how vulnerable it makes them and oh god.
yells will poison the walls where. i love you's, you mean a lot to me, i'm not gonna leave you are hanged.
"stay because you love me." then another petal. "leave because i'm a bastard." (and so on, I won't quote the whole fucking thing here) this idea is so fucking brilliant. I actually read that three or four times because I love this so much. it's probably my favorite scene in this whole god damn thing.
For the Krishan: I have to confess I am really not a Krishan shipper. Really. But this made me 'daw' a lot and I love their relationship. There is this saying "Was sich neckt, das liebt sich" in german (in english it'd be 'Teasing is a sign of affection.' or translated literally 'Those who rally, love each other' LOL) and it's just so true sometimes~
he will swear it's just sometimes, he thinks that every word that glides out of luhan's mouth is honey You know I don't like honey but it's sweet and smooth (which, in singing would be good I guess oh god what am I talking about) but I really like that metaphor because I can relate a lot bc how does lien words.
Okay. Hunhan. I ship but only when there's no Sekai involved so idk haha It was kind of hard for me to like this but you still managed to make me love it okay.
people's footsteps will crush them until they resemble ashes.
"you're comparing your love to me with an animal. wow, i'm so touched." if you ship me with dialogue I think you two are married.
i've read about this disease where you can hear colors and see sounds. I want this so bad
nothing lasts forever, luhan closed his eyes and forgot those words. forgot facts and logic and the basic things that makes the world go round. being with sehun so close, just like this, defies all sort of knowledge.
the sun is the center of the solar system. well, luhan thought, they obviously haven't met sehun yet. aren't you cocky though.
Okay and here have a huge OH MY GOD LIEN because the end and how do you come up with this and flip my brain over because all in all it turned into a happy end for me (as a Sekai-rooter) but still i feel completely unhappy with it because it's so frustrating and oh god let me lick my screen for a sixty seconds (see what I did there?)
The second of Koelien and your not-so-secret admirer Eli
and like always i like how you quote my /secretly/ favorite lines and i just---- i want to say i love you again but that's too much but- okay i love you.
it's not like i;m 100 % original whatsoever i actually just got the idea from murakami's 'on seeing the one hundred per cent perfect girl' and it was months or even a year ago and i really cried the first time i read it (it still makes me sad) but yeah and i just messed with the explanation and i hope this is okay enough for a first draft ._.
bbbut i like it like this and i love you like this and /koala hugs/
the third of koelien and which not-so-secret admirer are you i have like a thousand, lien~
First off, Sekai. I don't regret pulling you into my OhTP.
jongin and sehun will both be the arms supporting the heavy load life dumps on them, they'll be the tears at four o'clock when it's too dark to see where the ghost of depression is hiding.
oh god you know how much I love the night and the feelings it evokes in people and how vulnerable it makes them and oh god.
yells will poison the walls where. i love you's, you mean a lot to me, i'm not gonna leave you are hanged.
"stay because you love me." then another petal. "leave because i'm a bastard." (and so on, I won't quote the whole fucking thing here)
this idea is so fucking brilliant. I actually read that three or four times because I love this so much. it's probably my favorite scene in this whole god damn thing.
For the Krishan: I have to confess I am really not a Krishan shipper. Really. But this made me 'daw' a lot and I love their relationship. There is this saying "Was sich neckt, das liebt sich" in german (in english it'd be 'Teasing is a sign of affection.' or translated literally 'Those who rally, love each other' LOL) and it's just so true sometimes~
he will swear it's just sometimes, he thinks that every word that glides out of luhan's mouth is honey
You know I don't like honey but it's sweet and smooth (which, in singing would be good I guess oh god what am I talking about) but I really like that metaphor because I can relate a lot bc how does lien words.
Okay. Hunhan. I ship but only when there's no Sekai involved so idk haha It was kind of hard for me to like this but you still managed to make me love it okay.
people's footsteps will crush them until they resemble ashes.
"you're comparing your love to me with an animal. wow, i'm so touched."
if you ship me with dialogue I think you two are married.
i've read about this disease where you can hear colors and see sounds.
I want this so bad
nothing lasts forever, luhan closed his eyes and forgot those words. forgot facts and logic and the basic things that makes the world go round. being with sehun so close, just like this, defies all sort of knowledge.
the sun is the center of the solar system. well, luhan thought, they obviously haven't met sehun yet.
aren't you cocky though.
Okay and here have a huge OH MY GOD LIEN because the end and how do you come up with this and flip my brain over because all in all it turned into a happy end for me (as a Sekai-rooter) but still i feel completely unhappy with it because it's so frustrating and oh god let me lick my screen for a sixty seconds (see what I did there?)
The second of Koelien and your not-so-secret admirer
Eli
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and like always i like how you quote my /secretly/ favorite lines and i just---- i want to say i love you again but that's too much but- okay i love you.
it's not like i;m 100 % original whatsoever
i actually just got the idea from murakami's
'on seeing the one hundred per cent perfect girl' and it was months or even a year ago and i really cried the first time i read it (it still makes me sad) but yeah and i just messed with the explanation and i hope this is okay enough for a first draft ._.
bbbut i like it like this and i love you like this and /koala hugs/
the third of koelien and which not-so-secret admirer are you i have like a thousand,
lien~
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i love you too~ , I secretly sneaked into your "favorite lines" section and copy+pasted it okay I confess
sssh just call it inspiration okay
I do that all the time tbh ("inspiration", not crying. well wait that too OTL)
the second of koelien and the dumbest of your not-so-secret-admirers I am easy to spot
Eli~
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