I pretty much love this, that is all. Your writing is beautiful ok.
At first my heart was breaking because Sehun kept dying and Jongin keeps trying but fails. And insert some lil bit of cheese and bam Luhan enters the picture! I did not see that coming boohoo.
I loved Baek relating life to sugar. And the whole sugar appearance throughout the fic was awesome.
I somehow ended liking Sehun's version more Idk they're both beautiful though.
Loved the Jongdae and Minseok ending. So perfect. ;-;
This was beautiful. Every single new scene I could feel the love jongin felt towards sehun. And then when you did sehun's I wanted to scream. Especially at that hospital one because sehun had loved jongin just as much every time and omg I'm crying again. This was just so so beautiful. Omg I can't even comment normally. There's so much today but I don't know how to say them
THIS WAS SO FUCKING BRUTAL I AM ON THE EDGE OF TEARS NO IM ALREADY CRYING like this is so sad and jongin jongin jongin who remembers everything and sehun who doesnt and jongin who tries to keep everything in place and sehun who gets lost each and every time they come together and they. just. died. together. im. NOT. OK i also really loved the ending where you mentioned the broken jade ugh and how you would always repeat and bring up recurring objects (TEA BREWING) JESUS CHRIST I AM SO RILED UP RN THESE FEELINGS ARE INTENSE
I FEEL LIKE THIS WHOLE FIC MAKES NO SENSE BUT I SECRETLY LOVE YOU SO /sobs and omg i just noticed the tea thing too. altho i was aware of repeating the sugar why didn't i have them meet for a cup of tea. but omg all in all thank you so much for the comment and sorry for the feels ;;
YOU SECRETLY LOVE ME IS THAT A QUIRKY TYPO I SWEAR TO GOD IF YOU WROTE THE TEA SCENE I MIGHT BE MORE AFFECTED THAN I AM NOW and don't apologize omg it is amazing to be able to ignite such feelings in people ♥
I SECRETLY LOVE YOU- oh look another typo. ( i mean seriously like i quietly sob in the corner for you and i just can't ) but thank you so much, it means a lot when people say stuff like that because yes i'm a hardcore believer in feels when it comes to writing/reading in general
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I pretty much love this, that is all.
Your writing is beautiful ok.
At first my heart was breaking because Sehun kept dying and Jongin keeps trying but fails. And insert some lil bit of cheese and bam Luhan enters the picture! I did not see that coming boohoo.
I loved Baek relating life to sugar. And the whole sugar appearance throughout the fic was awesome.
I somehow ended liking Sehun's version more Idk they're both beautiful though.
Loved the Jongdae and Minseok ending. So perfect.
;-;
/goes and buys jade necklace/
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THIS MADE ME SMILE. like srsly thank you for reading and commenting! ;;
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This was just so so beautiful. Omg I can't even comment normally. There's so much today but I don't know how to say them
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NO IM ALREADY CRYING
like this is so sad and jongin jongin jongin who remembers everything and sehun who doesnt and jongin who tries to keep everything in place and sehun who gets lost each and every time they come together and they. just. died. together. im. NOT. OK
i also really loved the ending where you mentioned the broken jade ugh and how you would always repeat and bring up recurring objects (TEA BREWING) JESUS CHRIST I AM SO RILED UP RN THESE FEELINGS ARE INTENSE
okay i'm sorry for rambling i just :|||
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and omg i just noticed the tea thing too. altho i was aware of repeating the sugar why didn't i have them meet for a cup of tea. but omg all in all thank you so much for the comment and sorry for the feels ;;
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I SWEAR TO GOD IF YOU WROTE THE TEA SCENE I MIGHT BE MORE AFFECTED THAN I AM NOW
and don't apologize omg it is amazing to be able to ignite such feelings in people ♥
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oh look another typo.
( i mean seriously like i quietly sob in the corner for you and i just can't )
but thank you so much, it means a lot when people say stuff like that because yes i'm a hardcore believer in feels when it comes to writing/reading in general
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sekai hurts okay. it's like they're this pair of angsty people who cant even.
i love you so much thank you for reading and commenting and for the hearts ;;
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you write so beautifully ;w;
my sekai heart is bleeding omg
i love this a lot T---------------T <33333333
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thank you for reading and commenting!~
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