Comments | onetaotrees: 190 mph [ii / ii]

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190 mph [ii / ii]

Mar 09, 2013 21:38

sekai | twoshot | romance, motherofall!aus | pg-13

( jongin is made out of stardust. and when sehun smiles, he remembers why he's worth the repetitive catastrophes. )

g: angst, r: pg-13, g: romance, p: sekai, f: exo, l: two-shot

Comments 57

coralicals March 10 2013, 16:42:56 UTC

This was just heartbreaking and beautiful. The story and the imagery and...and everything!! I don't ever comment on fics because I'm too shy, but UGH I loved this so much and had to let you know D: Thanks so much for this gorgeous piece!!

uberchrome March 10 2013, 16:51:43 UTC

i'm like that with some fics too, so i know what you mean and believe me. wow. and no, thank you for commenting and reading! :)

ficssucker March 11 2013, 07:35:20 UTC

yeodongsaeng lien~ wae oh waeee r u making my sekai's kokoro breaking and shattering and crumbling all over into piecessdkflfliopkl?!

pleaseuplease where is my fluffehh sekai?? TT____TT

but this is beautiful as always :'D

uberchrome March 13 2013, 10:56:44 UTC

omg i am so sorry! i know i promised some fluffy sekai but i can NOT control my fingers when it comes to sekai it always ends up being so sad. but i'm happy to know you liked it :}

colalovescider March 11 2013, 12:35:53 UTC

WHY DID THE JADE BREAK. WHY.
Now they won't be able to come back. TT
My SeKai heart is shattered.
I need to unship this. FAST.

uberchrome March 13 2013, 11:02:33 UTC

IT HAS TO OMG i actually had two alternative endings. this is the B ending.

the A one was to have gramps joonmyeon telling a story to two kids. the story is about a prince and a servant who was indebted to the prince's father. the story had more action and adventure but then suddenly, some sort of weird stuff happened and these two (the prince & servant) traveled through time, never finding the other at the right moment. and then papa kris would come and lecture gramps about 'how they're too young for this kind of cheesy romance' and he'd pick up the two kids and carry them.

it ends when the younger kid raises his hand in the air, flashing a jade bracelet.

i love this ending equally but i feel like the jongdae-xiumin one would do sekai some more justice :) anyway omg thank you for reading and commenting! :)

colalovescider March 14 2013, 16:27:26 UTC

TWO ENDINGS, EH?

it ends when the younger kid raises his hand in the air, flashing a jade bracelet.
THIS IS ASJDGADFHDSKFSDF Well hello there, Sehun (and I'm assuming the other kid was Jongin)!
Can you post this alternative endings as well? Hahahaha.

BUT BUT BUT I really loved the xiuchen ending one. Man, I know the scene they were witnessing was very meaningful and sad but I cannot help laughing whenever Jongdae calls MInseok, 'Minseok the photgrapher'. xD

uberchrome March 14 2013, 16:38:13 UTC

nope :P
i mean yeah, i wanted to post both but idk how to do it plus i think this one is more meaningful and- DUDE you should have seen my face while i was writing the xiuchen part. i just think that i got carried away with characterizing jongdae and omg i'm in love with him here so hands off ;-;

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beatinlove March 11 2013, 19:28:08 UTC

do you hear that!? it is the sound of my heart breaking. oh my, this was so unbelievably sad and yet so very beautiful. i love it so much ♥
(damn jade why did you broke?!)

uberchrome March 13 2013, 11:03:22 UTC

omg thank you for reading & commenting! :)
and i don't like sad endings myself but this is
SEKAI
SEKA
SEK
SEX

clap13times March 12 2013, 01:27:59 UTC

fuck kaisoo fuck sleep I'm going to read this now, wait for a huge ass i-love-lien-so-much-omg-comment.

uberchrome March 13 2013, 11:04:08 UTC

i love you ;-;