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190 mph [ii / ii]

Mar 09, 2013 21:38

sekai | twoshot | romance, motherofall!aus | pg-13

( jongin is made out of stardust. and when sehun smiles, he remembers why he's worth the repetitive catastrophes. )

g: angst, r: pg-13, g: romance, p: sekai, f: exo, l: two-shot

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colalovescider March 11 2013, 12:35:53 UTC

WHY DID THE JADE BREAK. WHY.
Now they won't be able to come back. TT
My SeKai heart is shattered.
I need to unship this. FAST.

uberchrome March 13 2013, 11:02:33 UTC

IT HAS TO OMG i actually had two alternative endings. this is the B ending.

the A one was to have gramps joonmyeon telling a story to two kids. the story is about a prince and a servant who was indebted to the prince's father. the story had more action and adventure but then suddenly, some sort of weird stuff happened and these two (the prince & servant) traveled through time, never finding the other at the right moment. and then papa kris would come and lecture gramps about 'how they're too young for this kind of cheesy romance' and he'd pick up the two kids and carry them.

it ends when the younger kid raises his hand in the air, flashing a jade bracelet.

i love this ending equally but i feel like the jongdae-xiumin one would do sekai some more justice :) anyway omg thank you for reading and commenting! :)

colalovescider March 14 2013, 16:27:26 UTC

TWO ENDINGS, EH?

it ends when the younger kid raises his hand in the air, flashing a jade bracelet.
THIS IS ASJDGADFHDSKFSDF Well hello there, Sehun (and I'm assuming the other kid was Jongin)!
Can you post this alternative endings as well? Hahahaha.

BUT BUT BUT I really loved the xiuchen ending one. Man, I know the scene they were witnessing was very meaningful and sad but I cannot help laughing whenever Jongdae calls MInseok, 'Minseok the photgrapher'. xD

uberchrome March 14 2013, 16:38:13 UTC

nope :P
i mean yeah, i wanted to post both but idk how to do it plus i think this one is more meaningful and- DUDE you should have seen my face while i was writing the xiuchen part. i just think that i got carried away with characterizing jongdae and omg i'm in love with him here so hands off ;-;

colalovescider March 14 2013, 16:46:44 UTC

Awww. But, thanks for telling me that there was an ending like that as well :)
lol What was your face when you were writing xiuchen? Bet you were snickering xD
I really loved Jongdae here, IT JUST FITS HIM. The characterization, I mean. /gives you two thumbs up/

uberchrome March 14 2013, 16:57:29 UTC

you're welcome! i talked to a really close friend about the ending and he was like 'go with whatever you think you could write better' so i went with the xiuchen one. /actually it was just jongdae but i figured it'd be so lonely to cover a scoop like that so i added xiumin/

omg i was GRINNING because i thought i was such a genius because of the whole minseok the photographer thing. nevertheless, thank you so much and i've seen your comment on kim jongin's guide to loving oh sehun before (correct me if i'm wrong) but i already love you okay~

colalovescider March 14 2013, 17:10:28 UTC

Adding Xiumin to the story was a great move xD It made everything more entertaining. :)

You ARE a genius for thinking of that Minseok the photographer thing! It was so right! :)
Yup! I did leave a comment for that before! yourememberme/flails/ /gives you more hearts/

Sekai was not my original ship before, you know. A friend bombarded me with fics so.. here I am. Shipping them with all my heart and looking for a way to unship them because my little hear just can't deal with all the feels.

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