Comments | onetaotrees: 190 mph [ii / ii]

uberchrome in onetaotrees

190 mph [ii / ii]

Mar 09, 2013 21:38

sekai | twoshot | romance, motherofall!aus | pg-13

( jongin is made out of stardust. and when sehun smiles, he remembers why he's worth the repetitive catastrophes. )

g: angst, r: pg-13, g: romance, p: sekai, f: exo, l: two-shot

Comments 57

thoughtsofgray March 24 2013, 17:07:09 UTC

oh. my. god ( ... )

uberchrome March 28 2013, 13:07:56 UTC

do you know how happy your comment made me.
i love long comments and i just /kisses the ground you walk on.
and i'm just so so glad you liked it and the things you quoted were some of my faves too and i love you all the more for that. sorry for the late reply but gosh thank you for reading & commenting!~

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uberchrome July 23 2013, 13:14:25 UTC

hi there! sorry for the extremely late reply T__T

uhm about the sehun part (it's actually my fault for being so vague sometimes), but he finally realizes that on the lifetime where jongin told him their story, when they were sitting down under the tree. if you noticed, in the other lifetimes, jongin does not dare to tell sehun everything about their pasts, right? and jongin pretended to be a writer and told them their story, thereby rattling memories off sehun. like you know how sometimes we forget something in rl and then we remember them bc someone reminded us? or we see an object that made us remember it? yeah... :) but as you know, they aren't meant to know each other so sehun died immediately (hit by a bus ( ... )

light_on_oceans August 21 2013, 20:33:02 UTC

this fic is lovely! i wish my comment could do justice to this wonderful writing ;A;
i love that both parts complement each other and that Sehun does remember in the end, even if it's only for a moment. i hope they're living happier lives now (or something OTL)

chagushu December 28 2013, 19:20:12 UTC

it's my sobbing day ; A ;

i read both of your KaiHun fics n all is angst n death, but it's really good!

Thanks for writing XD

rjaejoo October 16 2014, 04:27:03 UTC

This is so fantastic. The two POVs and the ending, jeez the broken piece of jade really just pierced my heart. Knowing that there was no more future, that was the definite end, unknowingly by Jongin's choice is so heartbreaking. Ok must go find fluff!