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[mykindasong]

On this lovely Spring day (we hope it is, anyway) we welcome you to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.♥ Comment for yourself only. Do not make threads for other people

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[anonymous]

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[aridseas]

aridseas @ cyanichues.

Arashi fandom only.

I'm never quite sure of what or how I'm writing, so any feedback would be appreciated. ♥

[anonymous]

I really like your writing, so I really have no concrit for you, I think you should keep your own way of writing and it's all perfect.
And don't know if I can ask this here but can you continue to write the series "A Parting Eternal"? I've been waiting for the update since last year. I really love that story and I hope you will continue writing it if you can.
But of course if you decide to drop it, it can't be helped.

[aridseas]

Thank you for your kind comment. ♥

I've always wanted to return to A Parting Eternal and give it a proper ending, as I do have the entire story arc plotted out and outlined in a word document. It's mainly time constraints and other ideas cropping up that have kept me from completing it- and it's not the only one, because I have about four or five other fics in various stages of progress, as well as two or three ideas begging to be written. I'm very flattered that anyone still remembers A Parting Eternal, and only wish I had the time and energy to devote solely to it to complete it once and for all. I may try to update it with occasional chapters, but I'm afraid that would still be a long term project.

I'm sorry I can't promise you more than that, but thank you again for this comment!

[anonymous]

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[jackie]

bubbly @ twirly_skirt // Index
I write (in order of frequency):
•Arashi
•Tokio
•KAT-TUN
•Kanjani8
•NEWS

Any feedback about writing style, things you like or dislike, general thoughts would be greatly appreciated. :)

[anonymous]

I read your fics for the first time today: I only read the Arashi ones, I think they are very well written. I would probably read more of them, when you do write more. I will be adding your comm =P

I like how your stories, although short, are complete: ideas, emotions and events are really well conveyed, and I can very easily imagine what you are suggesting. Quite vivid, your picturisation. And also quite rare.

Also, you have very, very good control over the language, which is something which is essential in a good story for me, since bad grammar, and using the wrong homophone really make me lose focus.

[jackie]

Thank you for the lovely feedback! <3 :)

I wish I wrote more often, and I've been meaning to write more in this year, but oh god I'm so slow. I struggle unless I have a solid deadline and even then, it's a challenge to get it done! D:

BUT I SHALL ENDEAVOR TO DO MORE, ANON. <3

[anonymous]

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[crazy_otaku911]

crazy_otaku911 @ pocky_addiction [ Masterlist]

I write for Kis-My-Ft2, ABC-Z, Hey!Say!JUMP, and Juniors (various pairings for all).

[anonymous]

Actually I don't have any useful comments :'D just wanna say that you're one of my favorite authors, and I'm excited whenever I see your name on f-page. Just a drabble is enough to put a smile on my face x'D hope that you'll continue writing more and more Ki/F and jrs fics.

[crazy_otaku911]

Awww ♥ Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the fics x: I admit they can be a bit... all over the place. But ♥ And I do want to write more Ki/F and Junior fics, so I do hope you'll be able to enjoy those in the future as well!

[anonymous]

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[dreamweavernyx]

dreamweavernyx at scattered_paper

I write for Arashi/JUMP/Juniors/Kisumai and occasionally NEWS/KAT-TUN. (Various pairings all around.)

Any feedback would be appreciated!♥

[anonymous]

First of all, my comments are heavily based on your latest Fic2 and some miscellaneous HSJ drabbles I've read of yours.

I think you've improved a lot. I remember thinking you were just one of the mediocre HSJ writers a year or two ago, but was really surprised by how good your writing has become! Your sentences are strung together better, plots are more interesting, etc.

The thing that jumps out at me the most that I think you could work on is to make sure you are fully explaining everything that needs to be explained. (Sometimes it's a small detail that leaves me bewildered, and sometimes it's the setting or a major plot point that leaves me drawing up short.) This is especially important for AUs, where the reader doesn't know what's going on in your head and can easily get confused due to lack of information. It's hard, I know, to spot the things you need to elaborate more on, so a good beta who will point out these things is your best bet to improve on this.

I can definitely see you improving though, so keep doing what you do! :

[anonymous]

I don't have many useful comment :S But, I seriously love your writing!~ ♥ ♥
Plot, characterization, and you don't have to squint too much vocab to elaborate a situation.

Please keep writing and do your best!~ :3

[anonymous]

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[eva_lee]

eva_lee Arashi Fandom, so far I only have three fics though: Here, Here and Here (incomplete series).

Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback ♥

[anonymous]

"The Night Before Christmas

[anonymous]

same anon

You might want to read this:
http://jememetime.livejournal.com/1803.html?thread=13395467#t13395467