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[mykindasong]

On this lovely Spring day (we hope it is, anyway) we welcome you to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.♥ Comment for yourself only. Do not make threads for other people

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[anonymous]

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[jackie]

bubbly @ twirly_skirt // Index
I write (in order of frequency):
•Arashi
•Tokio
•KAT-TUN
•Kanjani8
•NEWS

Any feedback about writing style, things you like or dislike, general thoughts would be greatly appreciated. :)

[anonymous]

I read your fics for the first time today: I only read the Arashi ones, I think they are very well written. I would probably read more of them, when you do write more. I will be adding your comm =P

I like how your stories, although short, are complete: ideas, emotions and events are really well conveyed, and I can very easily imagine what you are suggesting. Quite vivid, your picturisation. And also quite rare.

Also, you have very, very good control over the language, which is something which is essential in a good story for me, since bad grammar, and using the wrong homophone really make me lose focus.

[jackie]

Thank you for the lovely feedback! <3 :)

I wish I wrote more often, and I've been meaning to write more in this year, but oh god I'm so slow. I struggle unless I have a solid deadline and even then, it's a challenge to get it done! D:

BUT I SHALL ENDEAVOR TO DO MORE, ANON. <3

[jackie]

OH YOU. <3

I really don't write as much as I'd like. :( I have TIME to do it, I just lack inspiration. I need to find that thing that kicks my brain into high gear.

[anonymous]

I'm picky when it comes to pairing, so i don't read a lot.
Just wanna say that you write one of my most fave yama fic.
[This Ain't A Dollhouse]
can't wait to hear more from you :)

[jackie]

That is so lovely to hear, thank you! :)

I find that I really struggle with Ohno - finding the balance between spaciness and intelligence, but he's such a FUN character to write. :)

[anonymous]

Unfortunately I don't have any criticism I just wanted to say that I love the slight edge that always shows up in your fics, like sarcasm or that sense of humor that just makes me smile and giggle in front of my computer. A lot of what you write is very frank but slightly ridiculous at the same time, so I enjoy your stuff. :)

[jackie]

Thank you! :) I try to write how I speak, which tends to be dry and sarcastic. lol. It's wonderful to hear that gets across! :D

[bclar]

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Fic tags: Arashi (19), Kanjani8 (2)

I'm especially interested in your opinions on the following fics, but I'd be ecstatic over comments on anything, really.

Out of the Bag Ohno-centric; G; 1500 words
Eye-catchers Ohno; G; 1000 words
True friends Sho, Nino; G; 600 words
An Art in its Own Right Ohno, Arashi; R; 4700 words

[anonymous]

I don't generally read Ohno fics, so I read your true friends fic: quite interesting. a whimsical portrayal of Sho I thought; interesting to see if he would try to get a new skill just to impress a girl.

That is actually how I would describe some of your others as well: the Aiba-Jun ones: also really whimsical, in a good way. It makes me want to know more, to know how they would continue.

But overall, I like your one-shots. Self contained, and very nicely developed!

[bclar]

Actually, "whimsical" is one of the things I'm aiming for. Glad to hear it worked. XDb And that I left you wanting to know more, I think that is the nicest thing you can tell a writer.

Thank you so much! Not only for your praise, but for replying in the first place. You have no idea how happy I am that you actually took the time and read some of my fics. Really, thank you.

[anonymous]

Aww, your welcome! I love that this meme introduces me to new authors and ideas. I needed new ones =)

[anonymous]

Ugh. Typo. You're welcome.