[fic post] Smug

[oceansex]

Title: Smug
Rating: G
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings or Characters: Red/Green
Warnings: none
Word Count: 631
Summary: Green is getting tired of the way Red always looks at him.
Author Notes: For halclouds. I was going to sneak in a little Rival/Kotone, but Green was being a hog. Sorry. XD

Comments

[afterburn]

i adore your Pokemon fics a bit too much :DDDDD

[oceansex]

fffffffff that makes me so happy you have no idea ♥

[floette]

Awesome! I loved how you built up the story, it was great! :3

[oceansex]

thank you! 8D

[perfectzz]

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ /brb so touched crying/

[oceansex]

sdflksjdflskj /cuddles ♥♥♥

[kiwipunch]

Absolutely adorable ♥ ♥

you're pokedex has to be close to full
Though, here, it should be your, not you're. xD

[oceansex]

very glad you liked x3

thank you very much for pointing that out! I hate leaving spelling/grammar errors, so I go over things several times before posting, but mistakes always manage to slip in. XD thanks again! ♥

[lark]

Oh man, I felt this fic RIGHT HERE. *pounds chest*

This was so adorable, I cannot even express oh man a;ldsjf;leakjr;lakjewra. Seriously, you had me squeeing all over the place. You have so many perfect short little sentences that if I tried to point out my favorites, uh, I'd end up practically quoting your whole fic, so I won't even try. @_@

I love all the Rival characters to pieces, especially Green, so this was really awesome. <3 <3 <3 Thanks for writing it!