[fic post] Smug

[oceansex]

Title: Smug
Rating: G
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings or Characters: Red/Green
Warnings: none
Word Count: 631
Summary: Green is getting tired of the way Red always looks at him.
Author Notes: For halclouds. I was going to sneak in a little Rival/Kotone, but Green was being a hog. Sorry. XD

Comments

[conditionally]

omg this was adorable. the last line was perfect ♥ i ship green/red so much. so much.

[oceansex]

me, too! meeeeeee, too. these boys, ugh. /squeezes ♥♥♥

[scarlet_pencil]

BEST PORTRAYAL OF RED EVER. SERIOUSLY. And Green is just so perfectly irate and grumpy and yet he still walks up a mountain a bazillion times just to see Red. XD Absolutely perfect characterization. <3

[oceansex]

slfkdjsdlkj THANK YOU SO MUCH. characterization is my favorite part, and sometimes the way various characters act in my head might not match up with other people's head canon, so glad to hear it did! ♥♥♥

[ningicoco]

OMG THIS WAS SO CUTE AND AMAZING AND ♥

[oceansex]

HEEEE ♥

[ledgem]

It's great to see more work done with the original trainer boys! Cute ficlet as well! I love how you describe Red through Green's eyes. X3 Hope to see more of your work!

[oceansex]

you'll definitely be seeing more from me XD

thanks! ♥

[fat]

This was perfect! I love the way you write their dynamics :D

[oceansex]

there's something about these boys that just screams "WRITE ME" and I cannot resist

glad you enjoyed ;)