[fic post] Smug

[oceansex]

Title: Smug
Rating: G
Genre: Romance/Humor
Pairings or Characters: Red/Green
Warnings: none
Word Count: 631
Summary: Green is getting tired of the way Red always looks at him.
Author Notes: For halclouds. I was going to sneak in a little Rival/Kotone, but Green was being a hog. Sorry. XD

Comments

[moirae]

I love this.

Green's view of Red is perfect, and the way you wrote it was very clever--especially 4 paragraphs. This fic was very well-paced and nicely-written.

I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Plus, anything Red/Green is worth 10000 bonus points &hearts

[oceansex]

THAAAAANK YOUUUUUUU x) ♥♥♥♥♥

[caddyeverafter7]

Awe, I really liked this one. I'm not usually one for Slash, but I love the stuff you do ;) It's addicting ^^ Good job, and I loved the lines about how Red battles. Really felt it in my soul :P ♥

[oceansex]

thanks! that's a huge compliment, especially since I'm one that's hard to persuade to read anything outside my interests. :)

[koizumi]

OH MY GOD, AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. THIS WAS SO GOOD. ♥

[oceansex]

♥♥♥

[gorlfriend]

Hi, this is delicious :D

[oceansex]

thank you! :D

[chuuni]

ggfhkfggfkdj MY BRAIN SHORT CIRCUITED READING IT TOO OK. So Green, you're not alone there. XDDDD

Gosh I just love how EVIL Red is and how exasperated-but-still-dedicated Green is. It's just like how I imagine them. Thank you for this piece!

[oceansex]

VERY HAPPY YOU ENJOYED! \o/ ♥