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(FIC) Goodbye's Aren't Forever: Chapter 7: Mending A Broken Lie

Mar 02, 2009 21:53

Title: Goodbye's Aren't Forever: Chapter 7: Mending A Broken Lie
Author: Nyrok5 A.K.A Kezz
Rating: R, sometimes will change
Warning: MxM, Sexual situations, Foul Language, so on so forth
Pairings: Yunjae (Main), Yunho/Kimbum (Boys Over Flowers), Jaejoong/Hyun Joong (SS501) Yoosu, Changmin/ Heechul, Changmin/ Food, Eunhae, few more
Genre: Romance, Fluff ( Read more... )

hankyung, paring: yunho/kimbum, hyun joong, genre: drama, yoosu, pairing: changmin/heechul, genre: romance, heechul, genre: angst, fiction: goodbye's aren't forever, changmin, kim bum, hyukhae, fandom: super junior, fandom: dbsk, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, rating: r, dbsk, pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, pairing: yoochun/junsu, pairing: jaejoong/hyunjoong, jaeho

Comments 22

kattan69 March 2 2009, 11:35:40 UTC

Make sure you recover well before tempting to write again....feeling guilty that you are writing this while sick.

Now back to the story.....I'm so curious as to what is Daniel's motives....*still clueless*.....I'm so anticipating the mystery to be revealed soon.

Also, when is the truth going to come out...I want Yunho to know about Jae losing his babies....and of course the truth of why Jae left him.

nyrok5 March 3 2009, 05:01:28 UTC

Thank you, I'll try and write tonight even though my head is all whoooo but i shall try. Don't feel guilty, if i'm in a writing mood I'll write no matter if i'm sick or not.

I'm sorry for leaving you clueless, but at least you know who he is. Hehe it will be revealed soon don't worry.

Um... that truth might be in a little bit but some truth might be in the next chappie or so... *hint hint*....

Anyway thanks again <333

coeur2chocolat March 2 2009, 11:38:12 UTC

SPOT~~~
u're fast :p i was waiting 4 it ^^ Be back to comment

nyrok5 March 3 2009, 05:04:46 UTC

Lol that was quick, okay,

Haha lol yeah, it only took me like five hours to write lol the shortest time yet.

coeur2chocolat March 3 2009, 12:05:09 UTC

I feel a bit guilty 'cause u're writing while u're sick, so recover well before trying to write the next chapter ^^
Well, about this chapter...Finally we know who's the bastard that is threatening Jae but still i don't understand why he's doing it >.<
And Min and Heechul are so funny hahaha, actually i have never think about this couple but they're really cute and funny together :p
Love Chunnie and Hae in this chapter they're so a supportes of Yunjae <333 ( ... )

nyrok5 March 4 2009, 07:00:25 UTC

Lol don't feel guilty, I wanted to write so I wrote. Lol thank you for being concerned but hey while im off sick better for me to spend my time usefully than lying in bed watching dvds all day.

Hehe, at least you know who he is. His motives will be explained soon.
Lol hehe I'm glad i could amuse you, I don't know how I came up with them together but I really never thought about it until you pointed it out now, maybe because Min is all so manly and strong while Heechul is such a chick (no offense to him cause I love him to death hes so funny) but yeah not really sure why I done that.
Awwww thank you, at least they try and help the situation.

OMG really, you liked that??? THANK YOU <333

Your welcome, you don't have to thank me. I like writing fanfics and I like writing them so people will enjoy them. Haha ur addicted??? Lol nice.

THANK YOU SO MUCH <333

P.S: Hehe thank you, he's just so hot. Still YunJae couple beat him in hottness overload lol

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pawshingo March 2 2009, 12:46:50 UTC

OMG! It's so sad! Yay for Yoochun and Donghae for trying to knock some sense into their suffering friends! I just love what Yoochun said,
" Tell me there isn't anything there when you look at him, tell me your skin doesn't burn when he touches you, tell me your legs don't threaten to give way when you see him. Tell me when you stare into his eyes your heart doesn't skip a beat, tell me when your lips brush against each other you don't want to ravish him right there, tell me when he hugs you you don't want to tell him you love him more than this screwed up world we live in,"
It was just simply heart wrenching!Take all the time you need for an update, just as long as there's an update! Waiting patiently.....

nyrok5 March 3 2009, 05:08:54 UTC

... I'm sorry, *scratches head awkwardly*
Yeah, they are the only smart ones out of their group *whacks Jae and Yunho upside the back of the head*
Awww thank you, I seem to write good heart wrenching stories, NOT. Lol I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks, it might be up by the end of the week if I don't have that much homework after I go to school tomorrow *sighs sadly* lol
Thanks <3333

mizatvxq March 2 2009, 14:51:04 UTC

i feel bad for yun and jae...
one after another bad thing happen to them...
that hennie what is his motive actually...
i hope they can be 2gether soon...

nyrok5 March 3 2009, 05:09:59 UTC

*looks away* I'm sorry for making so many bad things happen to them *apologises profusely*
They will be together soon don't worry
Thanks <333

snow2kiss March 2 2009, 15:59:47 UTC

that man..err...daniel?...is so scary...he's insane *shudder*
still clueless about his motives...
jae should tell yun the truth already...so they won't suffer anymore (emotinally)...but...oh...well...he can't right?...*sigh*
"Yoochun asked restricting his younger boyfriend from running over to Yunho" -lol- susu XD who can it be except cutey susu XD

nyrok5 March 3 2009, 05:12:54 UTC

...*squeaks*...sorry...sorry...sorry... I apologise for making him crazy.
They will be revealed shortly.
Ummmm *hint* he does tell some truth in the next chapter or so
Lol haha I had to make Su an over the top fan boy cause I can so imagine him being one for some unknown reason. lol
Thanks again <333