SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGH. Okay, it was as bad as you said. Fernando is WRONG and BLAH. And....I can't even deal with this right now!
You better promise me a happy ending, lady. You just BETTER!
I KNOW that Fernando doesn't want to hurt Frank. Frank is a nice guy, I admit. And I want Fernando to be happy. But I do NOT want him hurting Sergio like did. True, Fernando was hurting, now I guess it's Sergio's turn? BUT IT SHOULD NOT HAVE TO BE THAT WAY.
This chapter reminds me a lot of the book I just finished. Sigh...again.
you know i can't promise you anything because that would be spoilers.
It is so ironic that you are siding w/Sergio........Jack n'Box anyone?
I should read this book apparently.
No, it shouldn't be that way, but I try, as much as possible to make my characters as true to rl as possible. Sometimes life/love isn't perfect like it is in the movies/books/fanfics, sometimes its raw & its painful & its not perfect.
You always say that chapter 5 was the best thing you've ever written but this comes so close it hurts. I am crying (of course). I feel like you are piecing a puzzle together, seeing these different events from both sides. While I will always love Sergio (maybe even more than I love Fernando...), my heart breaks for Fernando too and it's because of one little part: I spent months, years, imagining what I would say to you, how I would apologize, if you came back.” Fernando turns around, his face red, his expression hard. (this is the anger Sergio knows) “I wanted you to come back so I could prove to you that I could change, that I would change for you. I didn’t think about how I would fuck you into the mattress.I always understood why Sergio didn't come back, that he was afraid they would end up in the bedroom again and never fix anything, but it hurts so much to see Fernando's hope. It hurts to see his desperation, that he wanted to prove to Sergio that he had changed, that he was suddenly good enough. That he didn't miss Sergio just
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I don't even know how to begin to address this comment. Coming from you, knowing how much you cling to Sergio in most fics, it just............I just don't even know.
Seriously I almost started tearing up, it is exactly what I was hoping people would see. We saw a lot of Fernando's pain in Co&dmw, but to have it expressed, to have Sergio know exactly how much he'd hurt Fernando (as much as Fernando had hurt Sergio), and to have you see it...............(I should just stop writing)
Well a little bit of his secret was revealed here,if you look carefully. :-)
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You better promise me a happy ending, lady. You just BETTER!
I KNOW that Fernando doesn't want to hurt Frank. Frank is a nice guy, I admit. And I want Fernando to be happy. But I do NOT want him hurting Sergio like did. True, Fernando was hurting, now I guess it's Sergio's turn? BUT IT SHOULD NOT HAVE TO BE THAT WAY.
This chapter reminds me a lot of the book I just finished. Sigh...again.
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Just when I've jumped on the "They've both made mistakes and I am so hurt for them" train.... Hehe ♥
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It is so ironic that you are siding w/Sergio........Jack n'Box anyone?
I should read this book apparently.
No, it shouldn't be that way, but I try, as much as possible to make my characters as true to rl as possible. Sometimes life/love isn't perfect like it is in the movies/books/fanfics, sometimes its raw & its painful & its not perfect.
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I feel like you are piecing a puzzle together, seeing these different events from both sides. While I will always love Sergio (maybe even more than I love Fernando...), my heart breaks for Fernando too and it's because of one little part:
I spent months, years, imagining what I would say to you, how I would apologize, if you came back.” Fernando turns around, his face red, his expression hard. (this is the anger Sergio knows) “I wanted you to come back so I could prove to you that I could change, that I would change for you. I didn’t think about how I would fuck you into the mattress.I always understood why Sergio didn't come back, that he was afraid they would end up in the bedroom again and never fix anything, but it hurts so much to see Fernando's hope. It hurts to see his desperation, that he wanted to prove to Sergio that he had changed, that he was suddenly good enough. That he didn't miss Sergio just ( ... )
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Seriously I almost started tearing up, it is exactly what I was hoping people would see. We saw a lot of Fernando's pain in Co&dmw, but to have it expressed, to have Sergio know exactly how much he'd hurt Fernando (as much as Fernando had hurt Sergio), and to have you see it...............(I should just stop writing)
Well a little bit of his secret was revealed here,if you look carefully. :-)
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I'm glad you are enjoying still & thank you so much for continuing to comment.
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GOD this is amazing. this is just..mmm.
sorry this comment sucks.
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You aren't the only one who's siding with Fernando here.
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