№ 352; "Start holding on. Keep holding on."

[nodoff]

OKAY. FLIST.

NAMELY PEOPLE WHO KNOW Tales of the Abyss.

Please look over this third person sample for Tear and tell me what you think. With my application at polychromatic they said "it was a little too superficial" and that that wanted something that studied more of her relationships with the characters from her crew and the likes so I had to write a second

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[precto]

I really wanna say BEYOND FANTASTIC because it is.

[nodoff]

Okay, so that's two people. :D I kinda wish I could get the input of the rest of the ToA crew too. ;-; SHOULD I POST NAO ANYWAY?

[precto]

If you unflock your journal, I'll link them.

[nodoff]

Unflocked! :O

[dreckplica]

CLABE DIRECTED ME HERE. Looks great--! Really goes into her personality a lot more and stuff, best of luck getting in! ♥

[nodoff]

Thanks! I just wanna be sure that the ToA crew approves cause, well, it's Tear. And Tear is awesome. And I don't want to mess up her awesomeness. D8

[dreckplica]

You've got her awesomeness down--! Luke will be sososo happy to see her *_*

[nodoff]

Moar people to tease him! /o/ --I MEAN HI. 8D

[skycatcher]

I'VE BEEN DIRECTED AS WELL and I echo the sentiments of it being delicious and really showing how her mind works and her convictions, gentle personality, her goals, and what she looks forward to. IS VERY NICE GOOD JOB. ): It should've been accepted the first time, but this is lovely. ♥

[nodoff]

Thank you~! ♥

Oh, by the way, Jack apologizes for startling Peony with the fact that he's a skeleton. :( Sometimes he forgets that what's normal to him is not so much for others. :D

[skycatcher]

Hahaha it's fine, Peony's.... gotten used to strange things happening after a microwave blew up on him and Luke and Guy turned into women. ):

[nodoff]

... Yep. I could see that helping him to adjust.