№ 352; "Start holding on. Keep holding on."

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OKAY. FLIST.

NAMELY PEOPLE WHO KNOW Tales of the Abyss.

Please look over this third person sample for Tear and tell me what you think. With my application at polychromatic they said "it was a little too superficial" and that that wanted something that studied more of her relationships with the characters from her crew and the likes so I had to write a second

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[skycatcher]

I'VE BEEN DIRECTED AS WELL and I echo the sentiments of it being delicious and really showing how her mind works and her convictions, gentle personality, her goals, and what she looks forward to. IS VERY NICE GOOD JOB. ): It should've been accepted the first time, but this is lovely. ♥

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Thank you~! ♥

Oh, by the way, Jack apologizes for startling Peony with the fact that he's a skeleton. :( Sometimes he forgets that what's normal to him is not so much for others. :D

[skycatcher]

Hahaha it's fine, Peony's.... gotten used to strange things happening after a microwave blew up on him and Luke and Guy turned into women. ):

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... Yep. I could see that helping him to adjust.

[skycatcher]

Guy passed out when he saw himself. It was kind of epic. Then when Luke was a girl, he and Peony were in Mirror City and Peony was a pale dood with brown hair.

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That is very much being with the special. Oh, Abyss~. How easy it is to make you cracky.

[skycatcher]

It really is. XD I HOPE YOU GET TEAR AND JOIN THE RANKS.

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I HOPE TO JOIN THE CRACK AS WELL.