PD/FRINGE: Saving The Best For Last (PG), Gen.

[laytoncolt]

"This guy is the most boring guy in the history of boring people."

Comments

[rose_griffes]

Mmm, so I don't know much about Fringe but I really liked your dialogue for the PD characters. Nicely done. Heh, and Emerson making them for not-just-passersbys was awesome.

[laytoncolt]

Thank you! :-)

[lemona_pie]

I've never seen Fringe, but the PD voices are spot on. This was a really humorous little story - I really enjoyed it. :)

[laytoncolt]

Thank you! :-)

[laytoncolt]

Thank you! And you know, I haven't gone fic-hunting for Fringe yet, but if I decide to join any comms I'll post this there. :-)

[sophiap]

Here thanks to tomomichi's recommendation.

This is fabulous, and all of the characters' voices are absolutely perfect. Of course, you've now got me dying to know what happened to Ned when he was four.

[laytoncolt]

Thank you! :-)

[coreowyn]

The Pushing Daisies voices and (re)actions are just right! I especially liked "Each of the others had been surrounded by strange unexplainable occurrences, that of course, being unexplainable, Olivia currently had no explanation for"; it struck exactly the right tone with me.

Also, also, "As far as Emerson knew, she hadn't stopped talking since" (plus the whole paragraph preceding it... and the one after it. Okay, I will stop trying to pick my favorite part now!).

And oooh I love how Ned thrusts the menu at them when he's unsure of what to do next/faced with the unexpected. It just seems so him. And I love the babbling throughout the story. The quirkiness of the characters just shines through. I adore everything about this story so much :-)

[laytoncolt]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :-)